Yard Sale of Thoughts

12 responses to “First Fizz”

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   sarahsouthwest

   I like the way you’ve collaged this poem. Works really well.

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you, Sarah. I like repurposing text.

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   Helen Dehner

   Love the joy in this …. sparkling write!

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you, Helen. It’s fun to try and catch those light and fluffy feelings.

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   Tricia Sankey

   Great title for this bubbly piece. It kept me intrigued till the end and after! 💖

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you, Tricia. I’m glad it tickled your fancy a bit 😉

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   johnlmalone

   there’s a lot going on in this fizzy poem, and it appears there’s more to come; a cheeky little piece 🙂

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   msjadeli

   Now all we need is a little Lawrence Welk music to dance to. Fun write 🙂

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you, Lisa. The word ‘swift’ made me think of this magical movie-moment, and the words, a first date.

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         msjadeli

         You’re very welcome.

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   Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

   Sometimes a little Champagne is all that is needed.

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      K.Hartless

      Exactly, once it’s popped, no turning back. Thanks, Björn.

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