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TWT—Driving Delusion

Katie Frances Hartless
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Prompt: Fantasy

Toes shovel sand amidst the ocean’s endless highway. Unscalable cliffs shield our lucky combinations; I press the window up, silence.

Artwork: “Cliffs of Moher” by Roman Burgman

5 responses to “TWT—Driving Delusion”

  1. Mister Bump UK Avatar
    Mister Bump UK

    shovelling.. love it.

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  2. johnlmalone Avatar
    johnlmalone

    I love the phrase: ‘lucky combinations’ : so suggestive. concealing so much —

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    1. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Thank you, John. Had to kill a couple darlings to arrive at that final image. But, I like how it leaves a lot to the imagination.

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      1. johnlmalone Avatar
        johnlmalone

        definitely; you did well to follow your instincts: the poem is much stronger for saying so little —

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      2. K.Hartless Avatar
        K.Hartless

        Merci beaucoup

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