In the core of the city,
two onion domes resplendent,
full breasts offer up to god
sacred sips of nourishment.

From any compass gate
we find this blooming chest,
erect above the other heights,
this bosom garners full respect.

Church doors all stand open
in the onion dome city,
COVID can’t quench piety
in this place of ancient filigree.

The onion dome city is curse-free.
Burial, religiously mandatory.
The waxen bodies exhumed
since the Friedhof’s past capacity.

Cleanliness and quietness,
two teets pointed to the sky,
reminds us to appease our god,
make restitution ‘fore we die.

Candles and confessionals,
a life lived on the knees.
Bodies bulge outside the spires
the eye of god all-sees.

Above the red brick Frauenkirche,
two golden nipples perk high,
discover your immortal bearings
from the cleavage in the sky.




NaPoWriMo Day 22. Napowrimo.net is following Poets & Writers’ prompt today challenging us to write a poem that uses metonymy. We are invited to write a poem that invokes a specific object as a symbol of a particular time, era, or place.

I’ve been wanting to write a poem about Munich, where I currently live and include the iconic onion domes, which are the largest structures in the city.

Some articles that relate to burial here in Bavaria.

19 responses to “Onion Dome City”

  1. Gosh! So Booby! 🙂 I especially love the last stanza.

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  2. Didn’t mean another poem featuring a perky chest, but this ones been flashing me a couple years now, so thought it was time.

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  3. This is fascinating. My family is from Bavaria about 3 generations back, so I really love this poem and the personal insight into your home. What a distinctive structure, too!

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    1. Thank you, Kat. It was a poem I thought of a lot biking here. Glad it finally found some form, and could probably still use some light tweaks.

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    2. Thank you, Kat. I really love it here, and I admire the culture as well as the architecture.

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  4. Outstanding! 🤩😂

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    1. Thank you, Ingrid.

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      1. Perhaps that should be, ‘upstanding’ – that as well, I think!

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  5. Well penned and the perky perception of the onion domes is brilliant!

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    1. Thank you very much. I know you’re a fan, of these types of structures.

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      1. Speechless…. 🙂

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  6. Boobalicious, K.

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    1. Thanks, Ron. I “chest” wrote this one 😉

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  7. Pert! Cleavage in the sky, Norman Greenbaum..oh no that was Spirit. You do realise that you may be igniting a sudden interest in architecture!

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    1. Ha! Thanks, Hobbo. Hehe, love that song, too. Playing it now. You know, architecture has its perks.

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      1. 😂You have forever changed the way I look at architecture!

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  8. I like this poem very much. I love the onion/breast metaphor. It brings the city of Munich to life. Great photographs too. ❤👩‍🦰❤

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    1. Thank you, kindly. Munich has its own culture and its own flair. I hope I captured a bit of its eccentricity in the poem.

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      1. You did. ❤👩‍🦰❤

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