The Reborn BreakUp

Barefoot follower
chasing a racing pulse
cement wallower
a full stride repulse

Retrovert rejection
farewell akin to flight
the soul fattens from abjection
and naiveté lacks hindsight.

I lay down on the dotted line
cracked my childhood cocoon
connected two crushed valentines
and flew through love’s monsoon.

Artwork: Let’s Break Up and Be Reborn by Paul Sergio Zerbato

Ingrid is host for dVerse’s Poetics: From a place of pain. Join us in crafting verse arisen from pain.

27 responses to “The Reborn BreakUp”

GraceoftheSun

Wonderful piece, K. Truly enjoyed. Fantastic flow.💕

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Thank you kindly, Grace. Not hard to find the vein of a pain that transformed you and to revisit it with changed eyes.
  
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  1. GraceoftheSun
    
    Absolutely. My pleasure.💕
    
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abigfatcanofworms

This feels like a song. You really should put it to music!! It’s got so much pizzaz

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Thank you, Worms. Great idea. Might do just that. Been a while since I picked up my guitar to play.
  
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johnlmalone

wild, unbridled imagery capturing the rush of emotions —

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Thank you kindly, John. I just turned on the tap and let this one run. One of those moments.
  
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msjadeli

I love the clarity of that last stanza. Eyes wide open, into the storm.

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Thank you, Lisa. This last stance is definitely my view from above the moment. What it taught me about broken hearts and romantic love without limits.
  
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  1. msjadeli
    
    You’re very welcome.
    
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John

Beautiful. I saw each thought in its own vision. ❤️

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Your comment makes me smile. Hard to share my own helplessness, but I was left with new wisdoms and strength.
  
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Ingrid

Such powerful language and imagery! If we can ‘fly through love’s monsoon’ and come out singing, we are doing well 🙂

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Yes, indeed. Thank you kindly, Ingrid. Makeshift wings, on top of it. Funny, what looked like the bottom helped me to reach a higher too, in the end.
  
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  1. Ingrid
    
    I think it often does, loath though we may be to hit bottom!
    
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Helen Dehner

This is wonderful! Each stanza would stand beautifully on its own!

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Many thanks, Helen. Exposed myself here and wanted to write this moment with more clarity. Not sure it’s possible yet, but this feels like a good start.
  
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Hobbo

I love that last stanza 👏🙂

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Thank you kindly, Hobbo. Two sides of a torn heart looked to me like wings and so I thought about how to use the broken bits.
  
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  1. Hobbo
    
    It was excellent.
    
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Dora

K.,
The simple but powerful imagery of childhood just drives home the shattering of innocence. Beautifully written.
pax,
dora

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Thank you very much for reading this one, Dora. I’m grateful for your kind comments.
  
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sanaarizvi

This is incredibly hard-hitting and evocative 💝💝

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Thank you kindly, Sanaa. It wasn’t hard to return to this pain without anger but with introspection. For me, a sign of growth.
  
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

The imagery of the breaking (and break-up) is so strong. The artwork really goes well with your words.

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Thank you. I found the artist after writing the poem, and thought, yes, this is exactly what I’m going for, how delightful. Cheers!
  
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