These days, we all walk the red dirt road
over the remains of our nation’s ancient trees.
Their branches hanging upside down
like collapsed bronchi.
A patchwork of sky made from their felling.
The shade of their height and girth,
the deepest loss to planet earth.

© khartless 2021, All Rights Reserved


“I feel as useless as a tree in a city park standing as a symbol of what we have blown apart.”

For Allen Ginsberg

Among other things,
thanks for explaining
how the generous death
of old trees
forms
the red powdered floor
of the forest.

-Dorothea Grossman

12 responses to “Canopy Grief”

  1. a timely lament: so many species of flora and fauna are being lost; hopefully we can stem the tide —

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    1. Thank you for this beautiful comment, John. I think that’s why they say living through something like a pandemic because you actually have to be surrounded by it to understand.

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  2. This is beautiful, K.

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    1. Thank you kindly, Jeff. I will miss more than the leaves this winter.

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      1. You’re most welcome, K. Understood. Seems like missing things has become the norm in the past 22 months. Is interesting to reflect upon….have a lovely rest of your week, K.

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  3. This is so beautiful and so sad. An amazing, concise … lament. I think John has chosen the perfect word.

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    1. Thank you, Worms. Loss leaves us with empty patches that much is certain.

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    Colleen@ LOOSELEAFNOTES

    Beautiful tribute. I felt every word and saw the collapsed bronchi.

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    1. Thank you, Colleen. Your kind words are much appreciated.

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    writingwhatnots

    ‘Their branches hanging upside down
    like collapsed bronchi’ – Powerful image for the plight of the lungs of the planet. Beautifully written.

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    1. Thank you so much.Yes, I thought of that and our recent pandemic when watching the barren trees.

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  6. 🤍🤍🤍🤍

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