Our bodies balance,
Yin and Yang,
interconnected
philosophies,
carnal chi
gnarled branches,
same tree.

Ecstatic energy.
Fingers flayed.
Legs splayed.
Only in combination
is a full circle made.

Curves,
a corporal parade.
Duality is required
for our unity.
Disaster, our doorway
to good fortune.
Illness, the slippery rocks
we scale to reach good health.

Falsity illuminates truth–
complement me,
and I’ll complete you.
Your shadow
on my sunny slope.
Two drops of sweat
swirled in heavenly hope.

© 2022 | K.Hartless

22 responses to “Cosmic Completion”

  1. Tom Avatar

    Sensual and tender in equal measure 🙂 Beautifully imagined, K! ❤

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    1. Many thanks, Tom. It was a zen write for me. 💜

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  2. H.O.T. and tender, too. Thanks.

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    1. Thank you.💜

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  3. a jubilant paean of a poem to erotic love; ‘
    ‘the skipping reels of rhyme’ give this poem real momentum !

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    1. Thank you kindly, John. Yin and Yang achieved then. It looks easier than it is.

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      1. terrific poem, K: as the ham said to the cheese , ‘you’re on a roll’ 🙂

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      2. Thank you; gosh , I sure wish I knew where I was rolling. 😂

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      3. Lol

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  4. Yes, very nice and I appreciate the sensual nature, yet pure and sweet! There is a grace to your writing that relates and reflects the picture so beautifully. 💜

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  5. A gorgeous contemplation on existence. I adore how you use the paradox of life to show its unity. I love this write, K. 💜

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    1. Thank you, Jeff. I think I’ve learned to accept that we need what is opposite of us to exist, and to have balance. I appreciate you reading my words and your thoughtful comments.

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  6. Quite a love song!!

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    1. Thank you, worms. May be it lacks melody. 😉

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  7. Sensual philosophy as only you can create K. Love this.

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    1. Oh, thank you, Marion. I do birth some bizarre ones. I enjoyed reexamining this symbol.

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  8. Jim W. Avatar
    Jim W.

    🏵️🌹🌸🌺🪷🌻💐🌷

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    1. 💜💜💜

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  9. Beautifully sensual! 😘

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    1. Thank you. 💜

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  10. Beautiful the movement in this lovely writing!

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  11. Wow! That’s a knockout. Wonderful companion to Cosmic Grooming. These lines are so graceful and meaningful and true — gnarled branches, same tree. — Only in combination is a full circle made. — Two drops of sweat swirled in heavenly hope. — Visceral and real ad magical. Love it!

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