Yard Sale of Thoughts

16 responses to “Summer Dream”

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   Tom

   Very vivid imagery you sprinkle throughout – great verses! 🙂

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you, Tom. I did catch a seaside nap today, and woke to the braking camouflage waves.

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   johnlmalone

   there is indeed ‘power in a reverie’; I admire this extended militaristic metaphor; poetry students could learn much from this 🙂

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you, John. Penned this right after waking up from an oceanside snooze. I highly recommend them and do hope I sneak a few more in before the end of the week\.

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         johnlmalone

         an oceanside snooze would be a cure for many ills 🙂

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   yourplateormine967244485

   I love this and wonderful use of military words!! You wove them beautifully to paint a beautiful scene! 🥰

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   Jeff Flesch

   Ah, the dreaminess of summertime. Lovely, K. 💜

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you. It’s hard getting all this vitamin D in a row. 💜

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         Jeff Flesch

         You’re most welcome. Ah, I get that. 💜

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   Jim W.

   😸😸😸

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   EclecticMusicLover

   A lovely song to accompany an equally lovely poem!

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you. It took almost all week, but I finally got the hang of letting go.

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   writingwhatnots

   Love your images – ‘camouflage waters, peeling waves’ – fabulous.

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   jonicaggiano

   What a cleaver piece woven with military language throughout. Nicely done and you are right there is something so special about a bit of a snooze on the beach. Lovely work. xoxoxo

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   Cindy Georgakas

   full of imagery and metaphors well delivered K! 👏👏👏

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you,
      Cindy. I miss the shore already.

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