Yard Sale of Thoughts

19 responses to “Headstrong Haiku”

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   Jeff Flesch

   “A gray hair shoreline
   To be given an evening
   To be gifted time” That’s my fav, though I do have a bias for the sea, as you know. They are all lovely, K, the one about the tree limbs growing old together is so romantic.

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      K.Hartless

      Why thank you, Jeff. Your feedback is invaluable. I have learned to draw strength from nature and I’m off to do just that again this weekend. 💜

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   Nicole Horlings

   “Two snuggling trees
   remind me what it means to
   grow old together.”

   This one was my favourite.

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you kindly, Nicole. It was a mother daughter walk that brought that one out. She was admiring the trees. 😁

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   sandyroybessandbugzy

   Each one triggered thoughts in such a way that they became mine. Very special way of expressing so much.

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      K.Hartless

      Oh, how lovely of you to say. Thanks, Sandy. This comment really encourages me to keep writing haiku.

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4. 

   Misky

   Perhaps the trees growing old together. Perhaps it’s my age. Perhaps it’s attending too many funerals.

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      K.Hartless

      Oh, Misky. Yes, there is a melancholy there, those trees that have more of a lifetime to be together. 💜 Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

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   GraceoftheSun

   Amazing collection, all wonderful.💕
   “Pale blue colored shore
   Sacrifices are adored
   Give and take us more” Wow💕

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you kindly, Grace. I’m sorry I missed this comment some how. Much love to you. 💜

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         GraceoftheSun

         You are so welcome. No worries, glad you found it. Much love to you too, dear K.💕

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   Jaya Avendel

   Wow! That opening haiku just stuck with me. Beautiful! ❤

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you kindly, Jaya. I’m so glad it touched you. My daughter and I crafted that one together. 💜

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7. 

   yourplateormine967244485

   Well done my friend! All are lovely and fun, but, A gray hair shoreline to be given an evening to be gifted time, is my favorite too!! 💖🤗

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      K.Hartless

      Why thank you. That one was really in the moment. I appreciate you reading these mini-verses. 💜

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         yourplateormine967244485

         You are welcome 🙏 and yes, I thought so too! I do appreciate your haiku writing talent! Have a lovely weekend! 💖🤗

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         K.Hartless

         You as well. 💜

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8. 

   Little Charmer

   They are all beautiful. But ‘gifted time’ is my favourite. And a beautiful photo too 🖤🖤

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9. 

   Michele Marsh

   Always love alliteration ❤️

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