This poem was crafted for a contest asking writers to describe a surprisingly delicious food. If you have such a food in mind, please share it in a comment below. I love to try new things.


Rambutan, Rambutan,
my hairiest companion.

I take my time to pet your spines
before I delicately bisect
your leathery midsection
to unveil soft flesh,
blemish-less complexion.
Safe from harm, a sheltered drupe,
lick-able and cool.
I sink my teeth into creaminess,
suck your surface smooth,
careful to avoid
the hallucinatory spore
that forms your core.

The subtle flavor of your fruit
leaves me wanting more.
Oh Rambutan,
it’s you that I adore.

32 responses to “Rambutan”

  1. I love the frisky froth of this 🙂

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    1. Thanks, John. They are my current favorite snack.

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      1. I must try them 🙂

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      2. Yes. I do hope you can. They are scrumptious.

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      3. actually I remember now I have had them when we stayed in Penang for tow weeks at a friend’s place 🙂

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  2. Yes, I agree with johnlmalone, and I enjoyed your poem very much! And, ready to try a bite of rambutan! 🤗🥰☺️

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    1. Me, too. I love this unusual fruit.

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  3. “You’ve made blush, K.”
    ~ Jealous Lychee

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    1. ☺️ I admit, I often day dream about them when their waiting for me in the fridge. 💜Ty, David.

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  4. Lovely. Coincidently, I just had a friend of my time me about this amazing delicacy. I want to try one. Reads and sounds delicious.

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    1. That’s synchronicity, my friend, which means you simply must. 💜

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      1. Indeed, and agreed. Soon. 💜

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  5. Ha ha. Fun. I too love rambutan. Rambut is Indonesian for hair, did you know?

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    1. Indeed! Rambutan tastes like lychee 荔枝.

      Yours sincerely,
      SoundEagle

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      1. Oh yes. Maybe it’s all those spines, or the vibrant color, perhaps, but rambutan does it for me.

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    2. What a delicious fact. No, I did not. Thank you, Worms. I don’t k it if I’d love them quite so well if they weren’t hairy.

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      1. Lol. There’s something about hirsute fruit. 🤣

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    3. What a delicious fact. No, I did not. Thank you, Worms. I don’t think if I’d love them quite so well if they weren’t hairy.

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  6. Poetry Goddess - Luna B Avatar
    Poetry Goddess – Luna B

    Ooohh i love rambutans. Havent had them in a while

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  7. That is a weird fruit but a tasty poem about it. 🙂

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    1. Yes, and that about sums up me and my tastes. 🤣💜

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      1. That says quite a lot 😂❤️

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  8. I had never seen one of those! They look like lychees in a fancier frock. ‘Rambutan, Rambutan, my hairiest companion’ – that’s quite an opening line! You had me hooked! Thanks for introducing me to these hairy companions…

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    1. Well, of course. I find its got something special to it, and maybe it’s not even all I the packaging. 😁 Thanks for reading and commenting, Britta.

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  9. Tom Avatar

    Loved these tasty verses, K 🙂 Sounds like a fun fruit to try!

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    1. Thanks, Tom. It’s seasonal, so I hope you’re able to spot them somewhere. They are yummy. I loves food that surprises. 💜

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  11. Delicious in deed!

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  12. 👍🏻Love it! And I like rambutans too:)

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