Petite Pen~January 17, 2023

In the winter months, I have to look deep within to find a spark. This week, I discovered a Rainbow Brevity invitation on AllPoetry and liked what I created enough to share it here. If you’re inspired by the artwork, please join me in penning some brevity, 25 words or less. If you post to your own page, be sure to ping it back here, and tag it #petitepen.

Happy Tuesday!

Harvested

Cornucopia eyebrows,
the color of wheat and barley,
frame her black hole eyes.
Two pigment-less portals
scatter the universe
absorbing in return,
my first rainbow.

Artwork: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/670473463295261613/

7 responses to “Petite Pen~January 17, 2023”

Tom

Magical descriptions, K! 🙂

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Thank you kindly, Tom. 💜 I learned recently my eyes are pigment-less, reflecting back the blue light absorbed. Think that might have trigged this one.
  
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sandyroybessandbugzy

Hi K.
Your poem is an experience of what you found out about yourself. How unusual is that. I have never heard of that. This poem for me is just what I see. No reflection on your experience.

This is for me is an Eye with dark depth.

Eye deep and dark.

A harvest above the Eye
Arched and ripe
Eye void of care
A dark hole in the night
Ringed in yellow turquoise
A stare!

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yourplateormine967244485

Here is my attempt! https://yourplateormine967244485.Wordpress.com/1/20/23/moves/me/

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sandyroybessandbugzy

I am sorry ‘your plate or mine’ I couldn’t get the page on your sight. I would have liked to have seen it. Sandy.

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Jeff Flesch

That’s a fantastic poem. Loved the feel of it, and creating a rainbow, yes, please. Here’s my contribution.

eyes of sight
are feather kind, and are made of loved-
ordinariness by design

creating
a plentitude of darkness
dispelled
by

the magic of light in-kind

Happy weekend, K. 💜

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Susi Bocks

Oh nicely done, K!

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