Better late than never. It’s what they say, but is it what they mean? I was inspired by the featured image entitled “Sad Girl with a Rose” to pen some brevity, 60 words or less. If you have thoughts on the old saying or the image, please join me in writing a response. If you share it on your own page, please be sure to ping it back here and label it #PetitePen for all to enjoy.

Happy Tuesday!

The bloom of something new
is painless,
petals to be admired, plucked,
placed on a lover’s bed.
It’s when dormancy is destroyed,
the long-rested rhizome split.
It’s when light penetrates
a stubborn shell,
and the seedling within sprouts,
all that is within
rising to an unknown surface.
How intimidating,
the imbibition of life,
the catapulted view.
That’s when it hurts.

© 2023 | K.Hartless


11 responses to “Sad Girl with a Rose”

  1. forgive me: I thought you’d made a mistake with ‘imbibition’ but I looked it up; it really is a word — though auto-correct doesn’t think so 🙂 How did you come across that? great imagery, both verbal and visual —

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    1. Thank you, John. Yes, well, you didn’t know my nerdy science side? I was almost an Environmental Scientist. I studied in a program a few years before switching to the dark side of English Literature. Even now, I enjoy reading and writing about nature.

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      1. it really came out in this post 🙂 what an interesting background, the paths we take —

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  2. Tom Avatar

    Beautiful vivid lines, K – really captures that sudden shock of meeting a new world 🙂

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    1. Thank you, Tom. I saw this short video and it really put into perspective this transformation. My life adjustments seem simple in comparison, really. 💜

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  3. A thoughtful poem, accompanied by an enchanting song & video!

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  4. love this K! ❤️

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    1. I’m so glad. Brevity brings out my best. Maybe that’s why I cook and clean only briefly. 😂

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      1. hahahah good idea. mee too.. ha🤣

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  5. rising toward the light
    from
    a darkness-impaired catacomb
    leaves
    a lust for lingering among
    the last vestiges of love, and of hope
    and of you
    my one and only truth

    I forgot what the word count was, so hope I didn’t go over. It’s always a treat to be here, to read you, and to write with you. Happy weekend, K. 💜

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  6. Love this 🖤

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