Jason Freeny

Would you weep for Jesus on a high wheel
pedaling through the walking mall
passed the butcher’s window,
raw meat born again?

Would you believe in resurrection
or tie your shoes on the town wire
if you saw the savior cycle
over cobblestones,
one lone Dorgi
for a faithful companion?

Would you fall to your knees,
pray daily, if he blessed the
gun shop, then the smoke shop
and all the American children
along his route?

How would you greet the crown
if he rode a high wheel through your town?

© 2023 | K.Hartless


Written for February 24th Late Night Poets: Break On Through…Low Brow Art

22 responses to “How Would You Greet the Crown?”

  1. Tom Avatar

    Interesting piece – plenty of food for thought in these verses! Great poetry, K 🙂

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    1. Thank you, Tom. I like the dry wit with things such as this, so I’m glad you could appreciate this one.

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  2. I thought you were talking about the British Crown taking over. I would be okay with that!

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    1. Hehe, so funny, John. Maybe it is…😊😂💜

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      1. My online friends in the UK report that their government is just as corrupt as ours is, so why not join the UK? We are, after all, the same people. Our early history remembered.

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  3. you been listening to tull again
    when Jesus came to town
    then caught the bus ta new orleans

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    1. Glad he didn’t drown.

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      1. He is of now and how. death defeated. misery decleated despite luvin company.

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  4. Interesting verse and image

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    1. Thank you, VJ. I saw the paining and it just had to be written.

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      1. Welcome

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  5. what stunning imagery and pic; where did you come across this quixotic gem?

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    1. Hi John, it was in the late night poets programming to cover art of this nature. I actually get a lot of inspiration from their contests for radio shows.

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      1. you certainly do well with this form of art; keep up the strangeness 🙂

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      2. Thank you. Weird, check. 💜😈😊

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  6. wonderful and thought provoking , K. Love it.💕

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    1. Thank you, Grace. Definitely a more question than answer sort of painting and poem. 💜

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      1. I agree. Truly enjoyed.💕

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      2. 😊

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      3. 💕🙏💕

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  7. Keep it up!

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  8. What an odd image! I love what you did with the verses and how they relate directly to the painting. You ask some valid questions. What would I do? I have no idea.

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