Doris Zeidlewitz 1959

She’s wearing my shade––
Saigon Red,
a stop sign against cotton skin.

Across the crowded event,
her well-preserved porcelains,
a dress like french architecture––
spongy stucco below an arched updo.
Her glances, cherry firewood.

I smell, sip, then slurp an oyster
watching the evening’s pearl.
Oh, how I long to shuck her.
Call it drug addiction, but my new mission
is to reunite these orphan twins.

I’ll play the beggar with a familiar grin.
Mouths may be prophets, and
we will absolve each other’s sins.

As she approaches,
I can barely veil my veneration,
strike up conversation
until the tender sparks
connect our mouths.

Color reincarnation.

© 2023 | K. Hartless


Written for Art of Seduction 3/22 

20 responses to “Saigon Red”

  1. Wow. Amazing poem, powerful imagery. Love it.💕

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    1. Thank you kindly, Grace. 💋

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      1. My pleasure, K💕

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  2. “Mouths may be prophets, and
    we will absolve each other’s sins.” what a phrase

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    1. Thank you. I feel it may be a paraphrased biblical sort of phrase from my early days, but it works so well here. Thanks for commenting. I’m a huge admirer of your poetry. 💜

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  3. Wow, a gorgeous write, KK ❤

    ~David

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    1. Thank you, David. I had fun in slipping in Saigon details. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

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  4. cerise
    red
    inside of ma head!

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    1. Flare’d up feelings
      unsaid.

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      1. he tries to evoke self pity. waste of time and not very witty

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  5. Beautiful, sensual writing so alive with imagery! ❤

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    1. Thank you, Layla. I tried to conjure up all the senses of the place and put it into a kiss.

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  6. Tom Avatar

    Wonderful luxurious descriptions – paints such a vivid sensory scene! 🙂

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    1. Thank you, Tom. Regal red lips. It’s hard to look away when someone wears it well.

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      1. Tom Avatar

        You know how to spoil us with such beautiful verses 🙂

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      2. As do you with these comments. Thank you. 💜

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  7. what a sensuous photo and phrase, Saigon Red.; love the eroticized imagery 🙂

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  8. So many great lines!!! You make me want to be young again! 😂😉

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    1. Thank you, Tiff. You seem the type that never truly ages.💜

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  9. What a vivid and sensual poem. These lines are just so good:
    “Mouths may be prophets, and
    we will absolve each other’s sins”
    ❤️❤️❤️

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