Seeds by The Oneness

Death is no race or ride

or wild release.

No matter how deeply they bury us,

our spirits are seeds

traveling across infinite galaxies

to cross pollinate new species.

Our fruits multiplied with

each blossoming spring.

We are the storage

for all that went before us.

Death is another chance for

for release –

to share our masterpieces,

to germinate,

to breed.

©2023 | K. Hartless


GloPoWriMo#30: Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a palinode – a poem in which you retract a view or sentiment expressed in an earlier poem. I thought it would be fun to double down on this idea and retract not only my previous poem, but tonight’s poem as well. Tonight’s musings: Death is a Pendulum Ride and my earlier work: The Final Breakaway

Oh, April. It’s been such good fun. I’m always glad to see you arrive and to see you reach a satisfying end.

22 responses to “We Are Seeds”

  1. LOVE THIS!

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    1. Thank you. I heard this song for the first time a few months ago, and I really wanted to write about this concept. I think with more time this poem could grow even more impactful.

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      1. I agree.

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      2. 😃

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  2. Reblogged this on Songshine Sounds and commented:

    Happy Sunday! I posted today’s track alongside my final poem of Global Poetry Writing Month. I hope you will listen in there today.

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  3. Beautifully written! I love the three poems together as a trio.

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    1. Thank you. I appreciate that. It was a serendipitous trinity.

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  4. this is deeply ruminated; it makes me think of the last verse of Neil Young’s ‘After the Gold Rush’ —

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    1. Listening now. What a lovely connection. I enjoyed this concept so maybe I’ll return to it. This poem was rushed, but I’m glad I was able to pen it for the final day.

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  5. I’ve never tried a palinode; will give it some thought —

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    1. It was great fun. I would definitely write more them. I’m sure yours would be fantastic. It’s great fun to argue with yourself.

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      1. I often do that but I come off second best 🙂

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  6. Wonderful, K. Fabulous poem. Great video/song too.💕

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    1. Thank you, Grace. I heard this sun a few weeks ago, but I just saw the video yesterday. I love the concept of the song. 💜

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      1. Me too. So inspiring. Thanks for sharing 💕

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      2. My pleasure💜

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      3. 💕🙏💕

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  7. Wow. I really love this.

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    1. Thank you so much, Bridgette.

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  8. I agree dear friend. Artwork and poetry. So good.

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    1. Thank you, Coyote. Sorry I missed this one.

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      1. Good evening dear friend and you are welcome.

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