With each month’s picture frame,
I vanquish the jester’s stick,
the Buddha’s charm, the rough rope of arms.

I set each memory aflame
and backwards say your name
above three candles –
past, present and future –
I extinguish twelve mistakes
in one breath, quite easily.

©2023 | K.F. Hartless


dVerse Poet’s Pub | Happy dVerse Twelfth Anniversary!

Photographer and digital artist Jane Long

26 responses to “Burn it Down”

  1. Ooh, that is different! There’s dark magic in this quadrille. A banishing spell, no less. I love the lines:
    ‘With each month’s picture frame,
    I vanquish the jester’s stick,
    the Buddha’s charm, the rough rope of arms’.

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    1. Fictional fun. I really loved this reimagined image. Thanks, Kim.

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  2. powerful words and style

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    1. Thank you, Beth. The photo inspired it all. I really like that digital makeover.

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    Jane Dougherty

    Those images are creepy. The scary aspect of black magic isn’t the magic, it’s the people who believe in it.

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    1. Any sort of serious belief can be scary, wouldn’t you say? I’m thinking Crusades, Holy Wars and Jihad. I prefer to passively enjoy all faiths and spiritual practices. I recently spent a month studying Buddhism, but I don’t think that women are profane, powerless, and imperfect. I’m okay with Buddhists, though. It’s much safer to enjoy religious rituals in writing. 😉

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      1. It’s the blind faith in anything that is demonstrably ineffective that humankind seems to have a weakness for. There are those who would love for it all to be true, and there are those who manipulate the believers. Not restricted to religions either.

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      2. I would argue that faith, by definition, is blind, as it asks us again and again to accept that which we cannot see to be true. Labels are the result of fear and otherness is what we do to people and situations that make us uncomfortable or that won’t conform to our belief boxes, be they religious or otherwise. Cheers to the spiritual freedoms our foremothers lacked.

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      3. Yes, of course, you’re right. Faith is always blind. It would deny that water is wet and the sky is blue if dogma requited water to burn and the sky to be green with purple polka dots. We do have far more theoretical freedoms than our forebears, but we still seem to prefer the boxes and the comfort of belonging to the group ‘with the truth’ to be ‘on the right side of history’. Maybe the big difference today isn’t so much the freedom to choose not to join, but the freedom of choice. Most people choose one of the dozens of cults available, if only the one that says, I want/like it, so I’m going to have/do it, regardless of the misery that implies for people I don’t care about. Maybe I’m just a cynic, but I see ‘freedom’ used in very selfish ways.

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  4. Love your closing lines! Enjoyed the music video also!

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    1. Thank you, Dwight. I really liked Jenny Lewis in my younger years, and I was happy to see her putting out some new music. I also really enjoyed what Jane Long did with the old photographs she collected. Thanks for stopping by. I am taking a writer’s retreat next week. Headed to the mountains for a long weekend. I can’t wait to be back in the blue ridge.

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      1. You are welcome. Have a great time in the mountains!

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      2. Thank you. I’m really looking forward to it.

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  5. “Psychos” is such a good song!

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    1. Right? I never saw Jenny Lewis, but I might try to remedy that. I enjoyed hearing her new album for the first time yesterday.

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      1. I need to give it a listen.

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  6. Okay! Loving the magical and mystical vibes here.

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    1. Thanks, Nicole. The digital art inspired it. This idea of destroying the past twelve months, and truly, I made the rest of it up as I put pen to paper. I appreciate you stopping by.

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  7. Dark magic! The photo makes me think of all the creepy child horror movies.

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    1. The artist, Jane Long uses old photographs to inspire fantasy, magical realism sorts of works. Her gallery is very inspiring. The rest is all writer’s smoke and mirrors. 😉

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      1. 🙂

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  8. This is spellbinding, to say the least. What would come through such magic?

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    1. Honestly, I haven’t a clue in the real world, but I wish I could set photos aflame like that that. Thanks for these comments, Björn.

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  9. I vanquish the jester’s stick,
    the Buddha’s charm, the rough rope of arms.

    Your words sucked me in, KK! ❤

    A wonderful write.

    ~David

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    1. Thanks, David. I really like Jason Limon’s digital photography. I think I will write more using his works. Cheers, friend.

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  10. Frewin55 Avatar
    Frewin55

    What a great act of imagination, one is never sure whether literature comes from experience or imagination which is why reading through comment and response is so interesting although this poem stood up tall on it’s own…

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