Behind an island lodge of branches,
the beaver moon crouches
mixing mud and cloud debris
into a scent mound star.

Landscapes the night sky
to mark his territory
above a downstream dam of trees,
knowing this drudgery
may mean life or death;
he is industrious.

In night’s rimy sky,
he survives
by flapping his paddle-like tail,
mouth and eyes sealed
behind flaps of skin.

Without hesitation,
he dives again
for how long is anybody’s guess;
he is well-accustomed
to holding his breath.

©2023 | K.Hartless


Cover Art: iStock samposnick

Damien Rice I Don’t Want to Change You ~”Cause water races”

11 responses to “November’s Eager Gnawer”

  1. Thanks for sharing this idea Anita

    Liked by 1 person

    1. It was an enjoyable write. Thanks, Anita.

      Like

  2. I love the metaphor of ‘Beaver Moon’ and how cleverly you carry the metaphor forward; you do these sort of poems — whatever genre you’d call it — very well 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you so much, John. I don’t quite know what genre my writing falls into, but I know I love it. This one was really fun to research and craft.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. you are on a roll, K 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Thank you, John. I wish I could leave the words on the page for maybe a few days or weeks (okay, at least a few hours), but I’m an impulsive poet. I know my creations could be better if I could just learn the value of wait time.

        Liked by 1 person

      3. I know that feeling, K; I’m getting better at delay; I can leave my posts a day or two, occasionally three, but then I HAVE TO POST ! 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

  3. Tom Avatar

    Very intriguing descriptions you’ve added here – paints a memorable picture of such a secretive busy animal 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you, Tom. A rare sighting on such a clear night here. I appreciate your kind words.

      Liked by 1 person

  4. thank you. time to dive again, indeed!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. 😊💜

    Like

Leave a comment

Trending