The sky wears her burka tight,
prepares for execution--
day masquerading as night.

The apple, once bitten,
is exposed--
flesh discolored,
skin swollen,
general revulsion.

What is meant to be plucked,
was stolen,
and you can’t transform one thing
to another
with words well-spoken.

What was protection,
marks her as property.

By twilight,
teeth marks
and bruised cheeks.

By dusk,
she's given up the fight
and fallen.

6 responses to “Worth Something”

  1. the opening is compelling as is the Islamic take on Eden prefiguring a fall ; a sad ending —

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    1. Thank you, John. I noticed the sky was really buttoned up a few days back. I am wanting to explore these themes more and more.

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      1. ‘a buttoned up sky’: I really love that; I love your play with language: you carry it off well :—

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      2. You’re so kind to me. I think I managed to put off a few people with this one, though. And so it goes…

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      3. I wouldn’t worry K; people get over the odd, difficult post: I’ve had a few of them, met with a blank silence; recover your equilibrium, then soldier on 🙂

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  2. A sad ending. But I enjoyed “the pen 🖊️ “ that wrote this. How beautiful (though too sad)

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