Do you hear the parrot's wings 
drip tears on a raging fire?
Do you hear her contour feathers singe,
as she flies through funeral pyre?

Do you hear the platinum cards
riffle shuffle beside the night's pot?
Do you hear the pale pill putter
into a random slot?

Do you hear the moon wolf cry
despite her muzzle,
or the sun slither back into
its hibernaculum crawlspace?

Do you hear the flowers sashay
into spring's debutante ball?
Do you hear the bees begin their courting
with whispered Southern drawls?

Do you hear rain's timepiece
pitter-patter...faster, faster?
Do you hear thunder's
bold and bitter laughter?

Do you hear tomorrow shush today,
as you wait patiently for your lover?
Do you hear the echo of each other
on a windy day?

Do you hear her suggest you stay
a heartbeat longer?
Do you hear yourself promise (quite dishonest)
you won't get carried away?

©2024 | K.F. Hartless


Cover Art: “A Lovers Ear Can Hear the Lowest SoundMargie Sheppard

The Ballroom Thieves “Everything is Everything”

Today’s Prompt: Write a poem of at least ten lines in which each line begins with the same word (e.g., “Because,” “Forget,” “Not,” “If”). This technique of beginning multiple lines with the same word or phrase is called anaphora, and has long been used to give poems a driving rhythm and/or a sense of puzzlebox mystery. I leaned into sound, something I feel my verses often lack, and came up with quite a grab bag of imagery. Cheers to trying new things!

15 responses to “Do you hear the parrot’s wings?”

  1. “Do you hear” was a great choice for anaphora, its reads as f challenging the reader to agree to what the speaker perceives. I especially liked, “Do you hear tomorrow shush today”

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    1. Thank you kindly, Maria. I had it written in my journal this line, and it really was the heart of this post.

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  2. I love everything about this, especially the sun slithering back into its hibernaculum crawlspace; flowers sashaying into spring’s debutante ball; bees beginning their courting with whispered Southern drawls; and the thunder’s bold and bitter laughter.

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    1. Thank you, Melissa. I had fun trying to refine these images today. I like how Napowrimo pushes me to be productive and try new things. Cheers.

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  3. there’s so much sensitivity to sound in this well constructed piece; each of the stanzas has its charms; this quality of writing urges me to try a little harder —

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    1. That’s so kind of you to say, John. I want to listen more. I think I talk to much, sometimes, and miss things like this. You writing inspires me as well.

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      1. thanks Katie: that sounds strange saying it the first time 🙂 sometimes it is hard to strike the right balance: I’m a talker too 🙂

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  4. Sound is a beautiful thing. This inspires me to listen to nature, and the great soundtracks you share too!

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  5. I like especially the verse about the flowers–just like debutantes! This also has a nice singing rhythm to it. (K)

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    1. Thank you so much, K. I enjoyed putting this together and found the anaphora freeing, in a way I wasn’t expecting. I appreciate your comment very much.

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  6. Tom Avatar

    Very wistful tone throughout, coupled with such varied & powerful descriptions that linger long after reading. Especially the 1st, 3rd and 4th stanzas – beautifully penned! ❤

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  7. Thank you so much, Tom. 💜 I had some inspiration in the Buddhist story of the parrot. Maybe I will come back to this idea of anaphora more frequently. It sort of allowed for my mind to be scattered and still make sense.

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  8. This flowed wonderfully.

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    1. Thank you, Nicole. 💜

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