White sky folds like sloughed off human flesh.
Lamplit sits in an empty red wine glass.
I've adapted the daily routine of a daisy–
eyes open at dawn and close by sunset.

Unfiltered, afternoon guitar music–
notes drip steady like a first-class relic.
I sit at the threshold, a candle lit,
pine and fennel, both allelopathic.

Acidic circle cast to prevent guests
with a scent that hints, leave me alone–
fluffy fronds kill its competition
but spill black licorice on open lips.

In growth, reproduction, and death,
nature teaches us to temper our openness.

©2024 | K.F. Hartless


Cover Art: Amanda Grae Platner, “Suck It Up Buttercup,” 2024

Nolan Taylor “Tear Drop”

Today, I wrote my first “American sonnet.” What’s that? Well, it’s like a regular sonnet but with optional rules. Regardless of rules, sonnet writing is a labor of word love, so I do hope you enjoy my take on this more laid-back form.

4 responses to “An Honest Sonnet”

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    Love that opening line. Wow!

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    1. Thank you. That was the seed of it. Now, trying to turn it into a sonnet, well, I’m not sure what I created, but I will say it was a fun ride.

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  2. Such a sensual experience, this sonnet!

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  3. Thank you. I sort of sighed when I saw sonnet. I love it, but it also feels like labor. I’m glad I went through the pains, though, to create this one. I appreciate your comment very much, PV. 💜

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