Plaster on the bedspread,
the wood above the doorway cracks.

If not now, then soon,
I'll lose consciousness,
swoon,
a syncope,

so, I flee down the stairwell
from what might collapse.

The lost keys,
missing earrings, and
cracked ceilings

have no meaning
when panic attacks.

My heartbeat in a cellphone ring.

Midst the rubble of feelings,
I find myself panting,
prostrate in a dog park,
afraid of aftermath,

of death by a design flaw.

So, I choose to wait
in humble posture, agait,
for time to clear a path.

©2025|K.F.Hartless

Cover Art: Jeffrey Smart The Earthquake 1959

12 responses to “Syncope”

  1. had to look it up: definition and meaning; going to have a read now —

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  2. read it a few times; alarmiing; your poem captures the sudden terror and collapse; will check out the video now —

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    1. It did feel just as described.I am happy with this first effort to capture the experience of a 7.7 earthquake.

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      1. ahhhh; I didn’t get that —

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    Glad you are ok!

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    1. Thank you. 🙏 I think it may take time to process what happened.

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  4. Wow!! You survived a 7.7 earthquake. Add that to the list of would-be assassins, KH. So glad you are alive and writing about this terrifying experience. Holy Hell!😰🫡

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    1. It was a moving experience. 🤣 Actually, not sure I’ll ever be truly still again. It’s back to routines and adjusting to our shifted perspectives.
      Thank you for connecting to me, dear friend. 🐣

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      1. “A moving experience”💀

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  5. You turned a terrifying experience into a gorgeous poem, as you do. Glad to read you are ok.

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    1. Thank you, Michele. I am okay. Maybe still sort of processing. We may have to move house depending on some of the damage here, but we are all okay and starting to trust the ground won’t move beneath us again anytime soon. Thank you for your kind comments and for connecting with me.

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      1. A traumatic situation that will surely take time to process. Hope all stays calm for you. 🌻

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