The water has a story yet to be told.

I wait patiently (like the rocks)
to hear part of its tale,
and feel my skepticism erode.

I watch the source strike pose after pose,
cross its legs before it folds
into a grand plié (waist touching toes),
with skillful arc, a trust fall
between the orange clay of earth
engraved in sunlight's gold.

Without inhibition,
the water jetés over the lip,
spray blindfolds,
believing in its footing
and the melting pot
of droplets
pooled
somewhere far below,

(though in this mist, chances thrown).

When a stream no longer trickles,
a roar of applause explodes.

While moss and vine cling cliff side,
water resides in a place
unspoiled by yes and no.

In freestyle,
wars, religions, even our own reflections
loose focus.

I learn from the great storyteller
to spill a vision,
(write better than myself),
leak ancient wisdom.

Execute grace far above
the failings of
my mortal soul.

©2025|K.F.Hartless

Cover Art: Khao Yai National Park, Nakhon Ratchasima Province, Thailand

4 responses to “In Freestyle”

  1. Sheer liquid perfection…love the ballet references too!

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    1. Thank you so much, Julie. This waterfall was so graceful. It truly dances.

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  2. I love the movement and flow of this poem, excellently written. ❌️🌹❤️

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    1. Many thanks, Carolyn. I had a chance to sit and really take in this place, and also capture some of this verse to take back home with me. 💜🪷

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