The tired diplomat returns home
to find his country’s not his own.
He spots the shoreline from the bow
it once resembled mother’s brow,
now it’s rocky and village dotted,
the childhood dock, dull and rotted.
It’s wobbly with weathered veneer
lacking the poles of Venetian piers.
The door to his cottage, plain and stained,
so small ‘side the porticos of Spain.

He enters there without a knock;
his clumsy key fits rusted lock.
In the corner, his green velvet chair
lacks the polish of a gilt bergère.

On the wall, a local pastoral scene,
minute beside a Swiss glacier stream
and in the bedroom, a sleepy companion,
his mind has long ago abandoned.
Her figure rounded and maternal
lacks the lacings of a German dirndl.
Then on her leg, a stranger’s son,
clung to his mast while chores were done.
Neither turned around to see
the stranger smelling of potpourri.

His sun-cured pipe smoke long since cleared;
it was worse than he had feared.
His treasured homeland once revered,
after nine years abroad, now
all reverence disappeared.

© khartless 2021, All Rights Reserved

12 responses to “The Tired Diplomat”

  1. […] she was going with a poem, which I guess will be way less than 390. I’ll link to her post here, when she goes […]

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  2. wow, I’m impressed. We must try this again, I really enjoyed this and by the look of the poem, you did too. Superb write.

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    1. Thank you. Super fun. I enjoyed the challenge and the company. We should make it a habit, for sure.

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  3. Scintillating stuff K!

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    1. Thank you very much, Hobbo. Great discussion lead me in that direction. The first few lines, well, I had to dismount off my bike and capture those in my journal.

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      1. 👍🙂

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  4. Well penned love. The imagery, you use so well, paints a better picture than the one that inspired the poem. Nice job. 🙂

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    1. Thanks, Brightness. It’s a long walk home, sometimes.

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  5. magnificent, Katie, the detail; that sad, haunting air; I’m bookmarking this gem — and having another read 🙂

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    1. Thank you kindly, John. This one has a special meaning for me, so I’m so glad you found it worthy of bookmarking.

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  6. this is really well done, Katie

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    1. Thank you kindly, Beth. Home again, home again…

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