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32 responses to “Erasable Embrace-Quadrille #121”

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   Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

   To have such memories … what a great way to cope with the puddles of life.

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      K.Hartless

      I love puddle hoping, and the one from this photo was epic, but also fleeting. Thank you for commenting.

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   Ingrid

   ‘erasable embrace’ – I love this phrase. Wish I’d thought of that one! Brilliant quadrille.

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you, kindly. The photo made me do it, along with my deep love of alliteration.

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      ben Alexander

      Me too! I’m jealous!

      -David

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         K.Hartless

         🙃I’m just glad one of my quirky ideas worked out.~KK

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   msjadeli

   “puddles of memory” what a great term. very lyrical and flowing poem in shape and in word

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you, kindly. I’ve always been such a free verse girl, but I’m trying to embrace the beautiful of form and pattern in my work.

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         msjadeli

         You’re very welcome.

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   Lucy

   I love this. Wow! It’s so visceral to me, and I have to say, the first stanza is my favorite. It’s all in the first three lines:

   “Amid puddles of memory,
   depth and filth unknown,
   there’s one erasable embrace of you”

   It’s such a strong image and verse, it can easily stand alone and say it all. I love how you entwined embrace in this poem; I feel it gives off an unforgettable moment or memory, but then it builds into more memories as one delves in. It’s just so beautiful.

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you, Lucy. What an uplifting comment. This quadrille is about my partner, truly, and the photo is from just a week ago. I appreciate your kind words.

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   sanaarizvi

   “erasable embrace,” is such a deep and profound image! 💝 This is a gem of a quadrille. 🙂

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you for your kind comment.

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   merrildsmith

   Puddles and memories are both so ephemeral–both may evaporate. Such wonderful, unique imagery here! Thank you.

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you for your kind comment. To me, even the bread is consumable and fleeting, as is much of our daily lives.

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         merrildsmith

         Yes, indeed. And you’re welcome. I have a bit of thing for puddle reflections. 😏

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   kim881

   ‘Puddles of memory’ and an ‘erasable embrace’ are wonderful, and the rhyming of the last lines of the stanzas is genius!

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you, Kim, for your kind comment. I thought I could mirror the stanzas a bit to make a puddle reflection of the text. So glad you found it pleasing.

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   Linda Lee Lyberg

   Such lovely words here. Stunning.

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      K.Hartless

      Thank you, kindly, Linda.

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   Beverly Crawford

   The embrace of family is so reaffirming and reassuring. Nothing like it!

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      K.Hartless

      Agreed. It’s been almost two years for us to be with loved ones afar. We are still waiting for familiar embraces.

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    Ron.

    Quadrilliffic, K! Let me just add ditto marks to all the previous positive comments. Write on, Puddlehopper.

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       K.Hartless

       Thank you kindly, Ron. I do love making a splash. ~KK

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    Helen Dehner

    I found myself studying the image ~ impressed with how they complete and compliment one another. Nice write!!

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       K.Hartless

       That’s so kind, Helen. I wanted the poem to live up to the idea. Perhaps, this time it did. 😊

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    -Eugenia

    Lovely imagery and as a lyrical as the bird sings. Beautiful piece.

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       K.Hartless

       What a heart-warming comment. Thank you, Eugenia. The birds are chatting away this morning despite flashes of snow.

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          -Eugenia

          My pleasure! I love to hear birds chatter because it makes me think of spring. 😊

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    rothpoetry

    Beautiful poem. Loved this line…
    Satiated by baguette limbs,
    warm with smell of home,

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       K.Hartless

       Thank you kindly, Dwight. Something about the unique taste of local bread that always feels like home.

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          rothpoetry

          Yes, for sure!!

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