Sundown’s Showdown

It was the last time they’d touch–
back to back, the earth and sky,
each one waiting
for the other’s pacing,
a chance to draw and die.
Sunset invades their characters,
endings and beginnings in a single step.

Their fanciful parting may mean nothing–
another duet dissolved into duel.
Standoffs often lack climax;
is it leaving or staying that makes us fools?

Artwork “Surreal Sunset” Antonio Insulla

14 responses to “Sundown’s Showdown”

johnlmalone

what an amazing picture and poem: capable of multiple interpretations: made me think of ‘Rocket Man’ and ‘High Noon’ –a strange conjunction, and that tantalizing last stanza; what a trip 🙂

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Thank you very much, John. Maybe too many westerns growing up but so many sunsets lately seem like showdowns, just seemed the right time to post. Not to mention it’s so hot here, feels like there should be tumbleweeds rolling past me most days.
  
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  1. johnlmalone
    
    Lol … it did have a sort of Western feel to it 🙂
    
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abigfatcanofworms

I agree with John – an amazing thought journey; beautiful and mysterious.

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Thanks, Worms. The sunset and I can hear the music of a showdown. Maybe tomorrow there won’t be another draw?
  
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John

My mind went somewhere else after reading this… ❤️

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1. K.Hartless
  
  A western showdown? A breakup that’s the final sunset?
  
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  1. John
    
    Another realm…
    
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areadingwriter

Sunset invades their characters,
endings and beginnings in a single step.

This is both enchanting with hint of pain, K.

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Thank you ever so much. Somehow missed this message months ago. My apologies. Hope all is well with you.
  
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  1. areadingwriter
    
    no worries. 🙂 you’re welcome!
    
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Brooke F.

This poem does a wonderful job of playing on one’s senses. Nice work!

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Many thanks, Brooke. I really like this poem as well. I appreciate you reading and commenting on this one.
  
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K.Hartless

Reblogged this on Yard Sale of Thoughts and commented:

Such a busy day here. But I thought I’d repost something from last August. Happy Wednesday!

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