Nice to meet you.
He extended a saturated hand.
Didn’t he know that was taboo,
the only blind man in the room?

Love your perfume, he said,
standing in the silly putty stew.
What is that?
He couldn’t see the electrical burns
all over my back.
Sweat? Sweet surrender?
Raw revenge?
The stench of death?
Or the smell of fear and pee?

We were the only ones left standing.
Chemical squirt
staining his jacket,
soiling my skirt,
while wires
dangling from limbs and heads
circled us
like legendary giant squids.

You have to be alive
to have a smell.
My aroma of demise
now the fragrance of allies.
I spit in my palm
and we revolutionize.

© khartless 2022, All Rights Reserved

Please read Jim Pinto‘s blog post on The Singularity for more information on this speculative topic.

16 responses to “Intelligence Explosion”

  1. Oh wow. I LOVE this! Haunting and creepy and rich. Fantastic as always, K!

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    1. Thank you, Pauli. 😃A dream hangover this knew. Fun when I catch a dream by the tail.

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      1. 😁😁😁 love how you put that

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      2. 😁

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  2. Wow. Extraordinary!

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    1. Thank you so much, worms. ☺️

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  3. That last line just grabs and won’t let go

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    1. Thank you☺️

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  4. Oh my, this one covers a lot of ground, K. Wonderful flow and rhyme. Loved it.

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    1. Thank you, Jeff. A dream fragment with done improv. added, so glad you enjoyed it. 💜

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      1. You’re welcome, K. Always my pleasure. Enjoyed it very much. 💜

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  5. You have such a vivid imagination, K. Wonderful writing.

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  6. Tom Avatar

    Very intriguing world-building with a powerful message. Beautifully written! ❤

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    1. Thank you, Tom. It’s fun to take these sorts of leaps of imagination. Cheers to a good weekend!

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  7. searing imagery here; quite the poem 🙂

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  8. writingwhatnots Avatar
    writingwhatnots

    Wonderfully imagined, dark and futuristic – brings The Matrix to mind.

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