Inspired by my recent showcase, I’ve also created a poem based on a Billy Joel’s track from his album, 52nd Street. ‘My Life’ is a mantra. My version has some adult themes, so readers be forewarned.

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You tell me: bike in the lane,
but I’m a handlebar honey,
two more turns in the batting cage.
Steer me round a mountain bike trail.
the baseball diamond has no bases,
but guess what, baby,
we’re still going to make it.
And there’s no wrong way
to cross home plate.

You tell me: play nice,
tickle his ego ‘til he’s ready to try it.
Bunt the ball; lean in on his pitch,
but I’m not the play it safe
kinda bitch.
I’m full throttle flame,
and I’ve got decent aim.
Stolen many a base,
got my head in the game.

You tell me: sit the bench,
cheer your mates,
all that sportsmanlike behavior,
but I’m no respectful team player.
I’ll pitch hit in a pinch,
if the curve looks right,
up and switch. Besides,
cleats are made for clay.
I’m not above rolling in the dirt
if there’s no room in the hay.

So before you go cause strife,
keep it to yourself; it’s my life.

26 responses to “My Life”

  1. they strike out?

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    1. 😂 well, this one’s more sassy than classy. A late night sorta write.

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      1. So is it inappropriate to say it suited you? 🤣

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  2. “I’m full throttle flame,
    and I’ve got decent aim.” – I LOVE this line!

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    1. Thank you, Bridgette. I appreciate you reading and commenting.🔥💃

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  3. terrific: defiant, devilish, dirty: I can see Britney or Pink belting this out 🙂

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    1. 😊 Sweet comment, John. All goals achieved.

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      1. all boxes ticked 🙂

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  4. Tom Avatar

    A very powerful and sensual piece! Beautiful verses about pushing against the norm ❤

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    1. Many thanks, Tom. 💜 I like writing with that rebel heart at least ever now and again.

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  5. I like the baseball analogy too

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    1. Thank you. 😊 it’s about time for the season to start.

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      1. Are you a Nats fan?

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  6. Awesome! What great language and rhythm. Your poetry is so versatile. So impressive.

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    1. Thank you so much, worms. I’ve always enjoyed switching things up, and I see even my writing reflects that. 😊

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  7. “I’m not above rolling in the dirt
    if there’s no room in the hay.” Amazing write, K.

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    1. Thank you so much, Jeff. 💜I don’t know where that came from, but I found it quite entertaining once it was written.

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      1. You’re welcome, K. Always. 💜 I just love when the words pour out without the knowing.

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      2. Yes, it’s a good and bad sort of pouring, for me anyways. But, it’s always a fun surprise. 😂

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      3. Hahaha. That’s funny. 😅😂

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  8. Ah, this song brings back memories of my rebellious youth. lol I used to turn the volume up and sing (scream) the lyrics to my mother at the top of my lungs through the closed bedroom door.

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    1. Oh Susi, we may have been living parallel lives as I did the same. Okay, I sometimes still do. 😂😂 Thank you for connecting with my piece.

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      1. lol Good for you! Be and do you, always, K!

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      2. Many thanks, Susie. 💜

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