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Rememberances

Katie Frances Hartless
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Hamlet, Folger Library Edition
New York: Washington Square Press, 1992

Ophelia left

everything in her flowers;

they gave nothing back.

Daisy petals lied;

withered when her father died.

Pansies lacked heart’s ease.

Violets, modesty.

Rue’s reprieve; she made good end.

Pray you remember.

© khartless 2022, All Rights Reserved

Ingrid is host for dVerse’s Tuesday’s Poetics: An Homage to the Bard and even though I’m teaching class this evening I had to share some haiku about my favorite Shakespearean character Ophelia from the tragedy, Hamlet.

39 responses to “Rememberances”

  1. Tom Avatar
    Tom

    A very touching and heartfelt depiction of all these blooms’ hidden meanings. ❤

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    1. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Thank you, Tom. I did try to tease out some meaning from when her final offerings.

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  2. Jeff Flesch Avatar
    Jeff Flesch

    “Violets, modesty.” What an epic line, inside a gorgeous write. Awesome, K.

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    1. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Thank you kindly, Jeff. Ophelia is a character I latched onto at an early age. Read Hamlet (all parts included) to myself. I think I was about 12. Lasting impression.

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      1. Jeff Flesch Avatar
        Jeff Flesch

        You’re most welcome, K. Ah, I see. Lasting impression, indeed. Those works we read early on do that, I think. Last, I mean. 😁

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  3. Peach Berman Avatar
    Peach Berman

    Love it! That first stanza is the epitome of power in simplicity. Rock on!

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    1. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Many thanks, Peach. 💜

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  4. Brendan Avatar
    Brendan

    Marvelous compression in these pocket rocket haiku. They work as epitaphs for her drowning heart.

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    1. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Thank you for this beautiful comment and compliment. 💜

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  5. Gillena Cox Avatar
    Gillena Cox

    Nice one

    Much💛love

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    1. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Thank you, Gillena. Light and love to you. 💜

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  6. calmkate Avatar
    calmkate

    very skilful composing, such a subtle reference through these flowers!

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    1. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Thank you, Kate. 😁

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      1. calmkate Avatar
        calmkate

        my pleasure 🙂

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  7. poetrybydebi Avatar
    poetrybydebi

    I love your (Shakespearean) flower language poetry

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    1. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Thank you. I always loved O.’s last scene in the play and the flowers, so symbolic.

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  8. Carol Congalton Avatar
    Carol Congalton

    Ooooo I like this! Beautifully done.

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    1. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Thank you, Carol. I’m sorry I missed your comment on my first time through. Hope you have a beautiful, blooming weekend.

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  9. a.h. starlingsson Avatar
    a.h. starlingsson

    That was really touching, but more, with such lovely use of flowers to express thoughts…so nice..

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    1. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Thank you kindly, Ain. I find sometimes it’s easier to let the flowers do the talking.

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  10. Jim W. Avatar
    Jim W.

    She should have stuck with the flowers and forgotten Hamlet….but I believe she was pregnant. There’s an alternate Hamlet that should be written from her point of view. Hamlet was a misery merchant and very privileged mass murderer…what a great literary hero

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    1. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Powerful perspectives,Jim. Hamlet was a lot like many young people I see, consumed with his problems, confused, hyper focused on the wrong things, and tragically damaged by his parents. Ophelia also matches many females thoughout history, defined by their male relations, unable to say what they mean, unable to be taken seriously, and treated as flowers, ornamental and to be displayed. 💜 thanks for this discussion. I’m really enjoying it.

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      1. Jim W. Avatar
        Jim W.

        She certainly deserves her own play…and not just that song 👍

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      2. K.Hartless Avatar
        K.Hartless

        I wonder if there’s a novel written from her POV. Must be, no?

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      3. Jim W. Avatar
        Jim W.

        I’m sure this has been looked into, but I’m too tired to check. I feel like she’s always been unjustly maligned and ignored. Maybe the “Revenge of Ophelia” would be cool….maybe it’s already happening?

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  11. Michele Marsh Avatar
    Michele Marsh

    Hamlets a great intense play

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    1. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Indeed. I may have absorbed a bit of that intensity as a child. 😉

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  12. Ingrid Avatar
    Ingrid

    I love how you wove all of those flower names in there: beautiful!

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    1. paeansunplugged Avatar
      paeansunplugged

      K, this is so beautifully done! Each haiku can stand on its own but from the play’s perspective, they become incredibly symbolical. ❤️

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      1. K.Hartless Avatar
        K.Hartless

        Thank you so much. Yes, I think I may have “over-read” this play as a child (is that possible?) I’m so glad you layers of meaning in it. 💜

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      2. paeansunplugged Avatar
        paeansunplugged

        No, over-reading is not possible! 😊
        You are so welcome. ❤️

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    2. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Thank you, Ingrid. I do so writing about blooms this time of year. Thank you for hosting. Spring is a wonderful time to celebrate the bard.

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      1. Ingrid Avatar
        Ingrid

        Thank you K, I thought so 🌸

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    3. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Thank you, Ingrid. I feel like I somehow missed messages this week. It was a crazy one. My apologies. Thanks for hosting this topic.

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      1. Ingrid Avatar
        Ingrid

        My pleasure!

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  13. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    I love how you painted her… vulnerable and a sacrifice to everything else.

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    1. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Thank you. Björn. I do romanticize her a little, I suppose. She has a wisdom and madness in this final scene.

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  14. Eileen Clark Avatar
    Eileen Clark

    Good day, I really enjoyed this poem and perfect image to add to it’s beauty.

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    1. K.Hartless Avatar
      K.Hartless

      Greeting Eileen, I’m so happy you liked these haiku. Thank you this kind comment.

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