Natalie Frank “Potrait 2006”

Once upon a time
there was a curse given
to a girl born in the 80’s,
a shiny glass ceiling.
Her evil stepmothers
taught her to bow
and cross her legs respectfully,
but the girl read copiously,
lost her curse dancing
at a Pascha Party.
And when an old-fashioned
Kishi returned it to her feet
with a coriander bouquet,
he told her it was a window,
a looking glass, her perfect fit.
She seized her father’s axe
and shattered him and it.
Made a mirror ball from sinew and glass
fragments; now she’s free to dance
through floral fields,
ford and follow any stream
with her fairy friends.
A happily ever after,
but not the end.


NaPoWriMo#29~ In certain versions of classic fairytales, witches or fairies are invited to christenings and bring princesses gifts. One fairy/witch, however, is not invited, and in revenge for the insult, lays a curse on the princess. Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a poem in which you muse on the gifts or curses at birth.

18 responses to “NaPoWriMo#29 I’m Just A Girl”

  1. Amazing, mystical! ❤️

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    1. Thank you. 💜Have a great weekend, John.

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  2. Tom Avatar

    Very fascinating portrayal of such an intriguing character. Beautifully imagined, K! 🙂

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    1. Why thank you, Tom. There are fairytales happening all the time. 🪄🧚‍♀️

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  3. Jim W. Avatar
    Jim W.

    I like her solo stuff more…like “Cool” and “Hollerback” and there’s a few more…??

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    1. Yes. This was a blast from the past for me. “What are you waiting for?” Maybe?

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      1. Jim W. Avatar
        Jim W.

        Let Me Blow Your Mind w/ Eve..
        that’s the other one 💜

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  4. Girl be ware of the “Kishi” – Ha! Just learned what that is! Her instincts will take her far from the Tragic Kingdom, if that’s what her heart desires🍊

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    1. Thank you for his delightful comment. Yes, if she walk through the spiderwebs and remember when not to speak, she may very well have a chance. 🍊

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      1. Niiiice😄

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  5. I love the feisty defiance in this and the capacious inventiveness with which she remakes her world —

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    1. Thank you kindly, John. Here’s to a future without magic mirrors (or other glass barriers) or a concern for who’s the ‘fairest of them all.’

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      1. amen to that !

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  6. Wow – your imagination had great fun with this!

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    1. It was fun. I have a soft spot for fairytale writing. 💜

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  7. Reading will always unfetter minds! What a whimsical take, K.

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    1. Agreed. Thank you. Worlds of whimsy here and I can thank all the stories I was read and continue to read. 🦋💜

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      1. You are welcome. Looking forward to more! 💙😊

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