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“It’s lopsided.”

“Better?” I shift the shield over Brenda’s eyes. Adjust her metal cave. Clank on the side a few times for good measure.

But no laughter returns.

For the record, this is her idea, not mine. 

After the pandemic, I was done with surprises, but I guess I am learning love is full of these sorts of compromises.

Soon we’d be transported thousands of feet below the surface to become the first couple in history to get married on the bottom of the sea.

Would her white veiled helmet hold? She finally speaks as I screw the last bolt in extra tight,  for how can I be sure… 

“I shall see you again.” 

The world on the first of May looks grey, greyer than expected. I close my eyes, and tell Brenda I love her one last time before we take the plunge. 

© 2022 | K.Hartless


Merril is the host for Prosery tonight at d’Verse Poet’s Pub. Our challenge is to integrate lines from Sara Teasdale’s poem “May Day” into a 144-word (or less) prose piece. Join us!

“For how can I be sure
I shall see again
The world on the first of May”

–From “May Day” by Sara Teasdale

38 responses to “The Plunge”

  1. A very creative take on the prompt! A great story!

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    1. Gillena Cox Avatar
      Gillena Cox

      OMG what a daring couple. Bravo on a really fantastic write. Didnt see that coming.

      Thanks for dropping by to read mine

      Much💛love

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      1. Thanks, Gillena. Long live underwater love.

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    2. Thank you kindly, Dwight. I’m glad you liked it.

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      1. You are welcome!

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  2. K, I love how you broke the line up. It seamlessly integrated into your story. What a fabulous idea and am delighted by the veil tied to the suit.

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    1. Thank you.💜Perhaps it’s because I went to a wedding this weekend that the topic is on my brain. I very much appreciate you reading and commenting.

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      1. You’re very welcome, and my pleasure.

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  3. I thought it was going to end in tragedy as the suspense was there all along. Hopefully they lived happily ever after.

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    1. Agreed. They definitely went the distance, so I’m thinking they might be able to keep the marriage afloat. 😂Thanks for reading and commenting.

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  4. I too, like Carol, thought it was going to a dark place. Well I suppose it did in a way! Very entertaining use of the prompt 💕☺️

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    1. Thank you, Christine. 💜

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  5. Awesome write, K. Some plunge. Kinda makes me anxious. 😅

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    1. Wonder, would it dissuade some if they had to do it on the bottom of the sea? Could be a good test to see whose really serious. 😂 Thank you for reading this.

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      1. Hahaha. 😂 Agreed. Your welcome, K. Always.

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  6. Sink or swim!

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    1. Can I wear floaties?😂😂

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      1. to offset those lead weghts on your feet? 🤣

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      2. I’m going to need a lot of hot air. 😂

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      3. Then you’ve got no worries!

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  7. Tom Avatar

    Great buildup of anxiousness and comfort that illustrates both characters so well 🙂 Hope they can keep their love afloat! ❤

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    1. Indeed. Thank you, Tom. It was a light write, so I like to believe they have the buoyancy they need to survive the dive. 💜🤣

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  8. So well done. What a crazy story! I love that she even has earrings on underwater, as well as the veil. I hope their love lasts through time and tides! 😏

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    1. Thank you, Merril. A great quote as it inspired so many different things. I’m glad the story came through with only 144 words, and I agree, when you go that far for love, there should be huge ripples of rewards.

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      1. You’re very welcome. I’m pleased you enjoyed the prompt, and thank you for sharing this story!

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      2. I did, indeed. Thanks for hosting.😀

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      3. 😊

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  9. Brilliantly told my friend 🖤

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    1. Thank you. 💜

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      1. You’re so welcome 🖤

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  10. hahahahahahah ~ KK, you are SO silly!


    David

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    1. Score! Silly so very rarely takes over. Thank you. I’m pleased to provide some comic relief. 💜

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  11. Oh my! For a second I thought….
    Such a novel take and the use of the prompt line was very original. Love will, of course, keep them afloat. 💙

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    1. Here, here. Hopefully, it will keep all of us afloat.

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      1. 💙💙

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  12. The breakup of the lines was pure genius… I hope they had a safe return from the wedding.

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    1. Thank you, Björn. I hope so as well or else they’ll both be drowning in sorrows.

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  13. Beautiful!!!

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