This week’s petite pen was awakened by the spooky paintings of Welder Wings. If you need some spine-tingling inspiration, be sure to give this artists works a brave viewing. I was working on a longer poem for this painting titled, “Ossuary,” but it sort of landed in a 50 words or less category. If what’s below this nun’s habit inspires your pen, please share your brevity. Feel free to add it in a comment below or if you post it on your blog, do be sure to ping it back here.

Happy Tuesday!

Dead to the World

Beneath the habit

of the Cannoness,

a pair of unlit candlesticks,

barren shelves of poverty,

and the thick skulls

of infidels.

Unabsolved confessions

echo off abbey walls.

In pious charity,

a witness to poverty,

oblate to obedience,

she takes simple vows,

keeps the

liturgy of hours.

Dead to the world.

© 2022 | K.Hartless

16 responses to “Dead to the World”

  1. Tom Avatar

    Very spooky yet vivid snapshots here! Cracking verses, K 🙂

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    1. Thank you. I must say I was surprised to learn what habits these women form. 😀

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  2. Haunting!! Great write! 👏👏

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    1. Thank you, Tricia. 💜

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  3. I love this piece, how very creative the subject, and I liked all the other descriptive images thrown in, beautifully done. 🦋

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    1. Thank you kindly, Joni. The secret a nun must keep below that habit.. an interesting topic, I think.

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      1. This was such a great read. Just loved it truly a bright star there. Have a great week. Hugs and love, Joni

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  4. Great writing as always! I do appreciate your petite pen challenges, they inspire me to get out of my comfort zone! Love it 😊
    My attempt titled: Spirits is on my blog site: https://yourplateormine967244485.com/2022/07/19/spirits

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    1. Oh wonderful. I’m so glad you penned something. I’m lucky to have such great writer friends to write alongside.

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      1. Same here!! 💝☺️🤗

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  5. the ‘unabsolved confessions’ are sad and troubling as this creche of skulls — I looked at her work, reminiscent of Frida Kahlo

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    1. Yes, I can very much see that connection. I read that buns can take confession but not absolve them. Strange the in tiers of piety. Thanks for reading John.

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      1. I was brought up a Catholic and spent a year in a seminary until these ‘tiers of piety’ got to me —

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      2. Every religion seems to have them, these layers of salvation. I find the nun’s subordinate role most interesting. Thanks for connecting with my piece. I’d love to hear more about your time in seminary.

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      3. thanks K; may put it up in a post someday —

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  6. Light and dark
    a shadowed world
    in between, seen and unseen
    Making up the body, and
    a sense of responsibility
    Is it for you and me?
    Or
    only for those in the know
    of particular sensibilities

    Loved your petite pen, K. 💜

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