Trees are cotton plants

cupping budding clouds,

ready to pluck

in the backbreaking August heat.

Beside me, on the front seat,

a burlap bag grows heavy.

Row by row

monotonous work week;

life grows woolen,

and I’m left with this itchy disposition

and a blanket-less night,

wondering how I got it wrong

when I nurtured everything right.

© 2022 | K.Hartless

16 responses to “Fruits of Cotton”

  1. Tom Avatar

    Very powerful & vivid imagery you sprinkle throughout – paints a memorable scene, K! ❤

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    1. Thank you, Tom. This one…it’s too true. The cotton clouds came to me on my commute this morning, but the song definitely inspired a bit of the rest. Here’s to the hope that is the weekend delivers what it promises in the way of some time for relaxation and some good reads.

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  2. Sometimes we can’t get it right…

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    1. True, and just what I needed to hear, although I’ll admit it doesn’t appeal to my type A+ personality.

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      1. It doesn’t appeal to many of us, we don’t like that we can’t get it right, that’s human. 🙂

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      2. It is annoying but also comforting, kinda like knowing the odds of winning the lottery are 1 in 292.2 million and it’s the same odds that you’d get it all right.

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      3. That’s very true, I think it’s because human beings can’t deal with uncertainty. We like to know what’s going to happen.

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  3. Ah, a powerful contemplation; and, life feels just like that at times, and then at others it doesn’t. Maybe when it feels like this too often, we take a deeper look. Lovely write, K.

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    1. That’s wise advice, Jeff. I do feel things will settle into routine. But for now, it’s checklists and a full school bag. 💜

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      1. I totally get it, and, though school doesn’t start here for a few more weeks, I’m right there with you. 💜

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  4. a fun play of life that happens even when doing our best. Nice try and description tho K.!
    💖💖

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  5. Great ruminations K – how often do we pick at our lives on sleepless nights?

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    1. Yes, indeed. Thank you for commenting. 💜
      The mornings are restless for me, as if the day ahead is running a hamster wheel in my head, but my body would like more sleep.

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  6. Wonderful! Took me right back to the Grapes of Wrath! 😉

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    1. Oh yes. That unforgettable tale. Thank you for connecting with this piece, Tiff.

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