My Janus Heart

This Tuesday’s Petite Pen took first prize in an AllPoetry brevity contest, so I thought I’d re-share it today. The piece takes a close look at a the yin and yang of parenthood. If you feel inspired by the image join me in penning 30 words or less to the painting.

Happy Tuesday!

My Janus Heart

She shadows me.
A forest reflection
birthed in natural light.
She is disbelief.
Fake shrubs,
fading greenery
in the waxy twilight.
Cushions apart:
My mirror
My daughter
My Janus heart

13 responses to “My Janus Heart”

Simon

It’s the constant emotional battle with parenting…

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Indeed. If I could only help her avoid my mistakes, but she heads that direction every time. It must be genetic. 🤣
  
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Jaya Avendel

Love this gorgeous, crisp write!

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Thank you, Jaya. 😁
  
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Tom

Some great vivid contrasts here 🙂

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Thanks, Tom. It’s amazing to think of the shadow a person casts in their lifetime.
  
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Michele Lee

Brevity at its finest. Well done, K.!

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1. K.Hartless
  
  Many thanks, Michelle 😁. A small bite of this topic is all I can stomach usually.
  
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Jeff Flesch

An amazing write, K. I love that piece.

Two, one
becoming known
into the abyss
a flock of seagulls, flown
down
tepid smiles drown
in place of a heart of tin, and gold
found

My weekly contribution. So much fun. 💜

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1. K.Hartless
  
  I can picture this gorge right there on the couch but also in the hearts of these two separate beings. Your petite pens speak volumes. I’m so lucky to have you writing with me every Tuesday. 💜
  
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  1. Jeff Flesch
    
    A perfect reflection. I do think these chasms can be profound, especially when they go unacknowledged. Thank you, K, writing with you is always one of my fav writing activities. 💜
    
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  2. K.Hartless
    
    That’s so kind. Mine too. 😁
    
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jonicaggiano

This is just so provocative, I also get it. Beautifully worded, Joni

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