A sequence of steps,
physical bodies in motion
shadows reconnect.
It may be ballet or jazz,
our canon of action,
a breathy breakdance.
retro, folk or techno,
unexpected unison.
Its outcome a surprise.
Whether desired or despised,
real love is improvised.
© 2023 | K.Hartless
Thank you, John. I like new music, so I listen to new music blogs on the way to and from work. She was a fun find this past week. Decided to put on her music and pick up a pen, it was as easy as that. Thank you so much for the positive feedback. I agree, improvisation makes for the best romances.
we are on the same wave length; we support each other’s writing 🙂
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How wonderful. 💜💜Thank you. 💃🕺
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This improv message seems perfect. So glad you enjoyed this track. 🪩
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Well, of course, I loved the underwater imagery of the bar. The description of the manager and the dancers. I think that was my favorite part. You’re such a wise wordsmith. Not a syllable wasted, which I love. I liked the idea of untrustworthy partners, but I think some of the #411 could be stretched if it was a longer piece. Like a bit firehose-like in some areas. I prefer to sip these sorts of things…💜
Absolutely love the last line. Beautiful work.
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