“Puberty” martha solorzano
Topless wildflowers discover shame,
sprout bandeaus to cover up
from winter's peeping Tom sun.

Overnight pink lipstick,
low cut leaves,
pert petals.
Disbelief descends
like a tornado or a gun.

Amidst garden gossip,
suicidal fantasies,
hateful frost, innocence
abandoned,
fields overrun.

One hellish spring,
then puberty is done.

© 2023 | K. Hartless


13 responses to “Before Her Time”

  1. That makes sense, wonderful, K. ❤️ Those were weird days…

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    1. True. It’s really like every day for me with my students. And my future with my own two. Inescapable, it seems.

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      1. You have all four hands busy each day, K! Wow, I couldn’t keep that pace up. God bless you and your family. ☺️🙏🏻❤️

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      2. Thank you, John. I only wish I had two more hands to do more writing. 💜

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      3. My babies are 29 and 31, one is married. Time marches forward.

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  2. not sage
    about the coming of age
    read the book
    take that look
    ok now~

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  3. Powerful imagery/ metaphor.

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    1. Thank you, VJ.

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      1. Welcome

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  4. It’s hard to experience it and even rougher to watch our kids navigate the rough waves of puberty. You captured the experience really well here.

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  5. I’d have been happy with just one hellish spring 😉🖤

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    1. 🤣💜indeed. Spring always startles me.

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      1. Me too 👍🖤

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