The Mall by Phade 1

Greetings Readers,

Many of you know about my stories centered on a strip-mall in the future. I’m so pleased to announce that one of these stories, “Love Needs Translation” has been published today on Fictionary. A huge thank you to Editor Akanksha Roy for not only finding my story worthy of publication, but providing me with wonderful feedback on my craft as well. What a treat!

I would be honored if you found time to visit Fictionary and read my latest, published short, “Love Needs Translation.” And to get you in the mood for this lighter, more humorous tale, there’ s none better than Foreigner and perhaps his cheesiest hit from 1984.

Listen first, read later, maybe?

24 responses to “Love Needs Translation”

  1. The opening question is such the hook. Kept me burning to find out! 🪐🥤🧡

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    1. I could not find the post comment button on the fictional page. So fyi if other people have the same issue u might not get as many comments there.

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      1. Thank you. I’ll let the editor know. That’s totally going to be my excuse. 🤣

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    2. Awe. This is the best. Thank you for reading my story. Everybody is looking for that perfect fit. 👟👟

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  2. Tom Avatar

    Wonderful engrossing futuristic story – you make the close friendship between Rawa and Lola so tangible through their banter and mutual support 🙂

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    1. Thank you for reading this story, Tom. It was nice to write something less epic and more everyday, but set in my future strip mall.

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      1. Tom Avatar

        Makes a nice change of pace from the typical save-the-galaxy / deep-space-horror stories. Lovely charming snapshot into a new world 🙂

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      2. 🏹💜

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  3. Congrats! I’ll head over and check it out.

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    1. Thank you! 😊

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  4. I am a no thank you to swillies. LOL. But I love their friendship, and dating sounds harder in this future. Awesome story.

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    1. Thank you so much, Nicole. Yeah, I think there’s a lot of new rules and stressors. You never know, Swillies might grow on you a few virtual dates. 🤣

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  5. love is both
    alive
    and a lie
    four letter word
    kiss kismet
    karmatic hates that is

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    1. Truth. The shallow end often looks deep. But, it’s your choice to jump in.

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      1. i ask tasked. presents from my past.

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  6. Congratulations K!!! It’s a great read, so well done! ☺

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    1. Thank you, Tiffany. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading my story. I know it’s more of a time commitment, so it really means a lot. 💜

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      1. I always make time to read your stories, even if it takes a few days! 😉

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  7. K, I love this! Heart ID, how clever! This is such a delightful story and it brings to mind, my outings with my girlfriends, fun and entertaining with food, fashion and flirting! ☺️💓

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    1. Thank you so much for reading my story, Pam. 💜I’m glad you enjoyed the lightness of this flash forward.

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      1. Yes, very much so! 🥰

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  8. Congratulations, K!

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    1. Thank you, Susi. 💜

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      1. You’re very welcome!

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