I could never resist neon. God, her tube top glows, and I’ve got a few spare coins to send across the rainbow for good luck.

“Is there a song you wanna hear, honey?” I ask.

“Pick the first tune you remember,” she says with a dimpled grin.

It’s a test. Okay, don’t blow it. Bon Jovi? Lame. Duran, Duran. Maybe? I scan the screen desperate to find the perfect song. Got it. I’ve heard this one a trillion times. And after a few hip sways, “I Got You, Babe” begins.

“This gonna be our new song?” she asks, sucking down the last sips of her lime margarita before asking for a lift.

Outside, the neon hotel sign looks like one giant jukebox. I whisper close, “You know, an early moon is just a piece of change.”

In the softening sky, I see her clink.

©2023 | K. Hartless


dVerse Poet’s Pub | Prosery: Breathing and Moons

144 words of prose to include:

“An early moon is just a piece of change
in the softening sky. “

— James Masao Mitsui,“Spring Poem for the Sake of Breathing, Written After a Walk to Foster Island”

34 responses to “Juke Joint”

  1. Bon Jovi, Duran Duran! I love that song, I remember it from when I was very young. 🥰

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    1. I know. I really. needed to dig deeper for these other song titles. Thanks for reading this piece of prose.

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      1. I’ve got flowers in the spriiing… 😊

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  2. Very nice! I loved the Sonny and Cher show!

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    1. Thanks, Dwight. They had that “it” factor, for sure.

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      1. Yes, they did. Their comedic timing was perfect!

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  3. Delightful. You set the mood beautifully.

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    1. Thank you, Ali. I appreciate this.

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    Gillena Cox

    Bravo!!!
    Thanks for dropping by my blog

    Much💚love

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    1. Thank you, Gillena. I appreciate this. 💜

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  5. Love this! 🎶🌚 I was enchanted with the intro.

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    1. Thank you, Michele. Neon truly gets me going.

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      1. You are welcome, and I can relate. In my late teens I worked at a local video store – the owner was heavy into neon. Very cool!

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  6. Like how you’ve interpreted the prompt line 😁 sounds like a fun time! ❤️

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    1. Thank you, Aboli. It does. Here’s to more nights of living in the moment. 💜

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  7. You slipped that piece of change in well there 🙂

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    1. Many thanks, Jane. It was great fun to write alongside such talented wordsmiths. 💜

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  8. Very sweet and atmospheric, K. I can imagine all that neon, and you slipped in the line so well.

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    1. Many thanks, Merril. Ah, those neon nights. Here’s to more of them.

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      1. You’re welcome! 🙂

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  9. Super sexy, KK! I like this so much 🙂

    Much love,
    David

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    1. Thank you, David. I’m glad you enjoyed this flashy flash. Rock n roll. 💜

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  10. This is so creative! You grabbed my attention with the neon tubetop! Brilliant!

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    1. Thank you, Colleen. A flashy little flash. I’ms grateful that you took the time to stop by and read this one. 😊

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    kaykuala

    You brought back all the memories of long ago KH! Creative write Ma’am!

    Hank

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    1. Thank you, kindly. Yes! I say, we bring these juke joints back. 💜

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  12. Absolutely loved reading your piece of prose, it had such an electric energy to it that kept me engaged till the end. Neon colors can often evoke nostalgia, happiness, or excitement and I think you captured those feelings well through your writing. What also caught my eye is that I too am a big fan of Sonny & Cher :)… isn’t it always great when something reminds us of simpler days, less complicated times, a sweet escape into memories past. Beautiful job! 👍👏👌😊🙏

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    1. Thank you so much. This praise has me all grins this evening. 😊 Cheers to neon nights and nostalgia. I have actually song this song as Cher (with a wig) for a little friendly competition. Let the good times roll!!  💜

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      1. Ooh la la! What better combination exists than radiant neon lights and cherished nostalgia to put us right smack-dab into euphoric moods? You hit all the feels by mentioning an icon adored by multitudes: the queen herself, Miss Cher! How incredibly fun to imagine you performing in her likeness during that spunky classic number! Talk about transforming into superstar mode, complete with hairpiece and vocal flourishes. Those lucky enough to witness such charismatic renditions should count themselves blessed, not to mention delightedly entertained. Shine on, dear enthusiast, keeping retro vibes and beloved idols close. Let us raise glasses once more to dance under stars and cranking oldies to ignite irreplaceable spirits that shall light up any gathering. Thanks for infusing some pizazz into my day! 👍👏👌😊

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  13. Oh I love the (not so) subtle pickup… or maybe she picked you up by letting you choose the song.

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    1. Flip of the coin, really. Thanks, Björn.

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  14. 🎶Just put your little hand in mine…🌈

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    1. 😉 climb on, friend. 🧗🏻

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      1. ☀️🦄

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