I was awoken this morning to hurried bird song, and quickly caught a poem by the tail and penned this small verse. Later this afternoon, I discovered Japanese artist Sato‘s mesmerizing Torigun, a Japanese avian brigade. I hope to be inspired to write more verse on about these enchanting soldiers.

Happy Sunday!

The morningbird brings telegram

squawked quickly ‘fore

the lines are gone.

An urgent message from a foreign land,

he prays none of his diction wrong

and that the meaning will be clear,

the validity of his carrier ear,

and that the flock of birds nearby

won’t misconstrue his urgent cry:

“Believe not the robin

his songs are all lies.”



A dreamy-sort of verse needs as dreamy song to accompany it, no?

11 responses to “The Dawn Patrol”

  1. This was so charming. Amazing!!!!!

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    1. Thank you, Judy. I was penning it, sore throat and all, this morning so early. Trying my best to keep up with that messenger bird.

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  2. Love it!

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    1. Thank you so much, VJ. I am ready for summer lightning inspirations. My journal is all ready to act as mitt.

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      1. Great metaphor. Yes! You’re welcome

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  3. Tom Avatar

    Neat twist on those everyday morning joys. Great imaginative piece! 🙂

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    1. Thanks, Tom. It was an urgent telegram yesterday. Today, more of an overheard conversation. I’m glad you enjoyed this one. Those birds are something else.

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  4. Fascinating, clever!🪶

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    1. Thank you. It was all the bird’s idea really. 💜

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      1. A Cinderella scene comes to mind☺️

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      2. Yes. If the birds had ammunition and bombs. 😉

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