Friday nights, when the temperature dipped below 100°F, my brothers would head to the Hot House and if I was lucky, they’d let me tag along.

“Don’t touch anything.” My older brother Bobby would warn, spritzing himself with our father’s finest aphrodisiac.

The Hot House was a plastic palace overrun with sweaty men staring at the long stem beauties on display. Colorful blossoms of every variety swung overhead on hundred-year-old vines.

“Care to taste my nectar?” said a black-eyed Suzy.

“But I’m not old enough to sip.”

She lifted her petals. “I’ll make an exception.”

I tried to think of what my mother always said before the heat stroke: “Beauty is nothing but the beginning of terror.

And even though I knew it was a sin, I couldn’t resist. After that night, I became a love criminal looking to commit my next felonious act.


d’Verse Poet’s Pub |Prosery: Rainer Maria Rilke

 144 words of prose to include:

“For beauty is nothing but the beginning of terror.” from “The First Elegy”, Duinos Elegies by Rainer Maria Rilke

Cover Art: Where summer ripens at all hours, 2019. Angela Fraleigh

FKA twigs- cellophane

30 responses to “Love Criminal”

  1. A bit naughty… 🤭

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    1. I’ve been spending too. much time around the birds and the bees lately. 😊

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      1. Well, that’s not really a bad thing… 🤭

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  2. FKA Twigs is a fascinating and innovative artist! I’m not overly familiar with her music or videos, but what I’ve heard & seen is pretty amazing.

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    1. I have to agree. She is unique and has this way of making a not-uncommon melody feel like something you’ve never heard before.

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  3. Wonderful and terrifying erotica, K. An altered reality you could build a world around. The image you chose fits the story well. That video was what I will call intense and leave it at that. She reminds me of Kate Bush.

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    1. Thank you, Lisa. I’m not at all sure how I stumbled on this video, but the heat here had me inside, looking out the window and thinking about the future of the birds and the bees. I really appreciate your comments.

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      1. You’re welcome, K. The mind takes us to interesting places doesn’t it.

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  4. Steamy stuff. I like the clever “floral” metaphors.

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  5. Thank you, Mish. I’ve had my own special garden view the past few days to daydream these sorts of things up. I appreciate your comment.

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  6. Incredible, clever, sexy!

    ~David

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    1. Thank you, David.  💜

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  7. That’s the way the bees do it…

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    1. Indeed. Opportunistic, or at least they appear to be out my window.  🙂

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  8. Jim Avatar

    Crime is catching until you get caught. Boys are rougher, but tougher.
    ..

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    1. So wise, Jim. Thank you. It’s the getting caught we often regret, not so much the crime.

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  9. Wow! That was quite psychedelic and cleverly written! It started off as a teen flick and ended as a weird sci-fi erotic crime thriller.

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    1. It surprised me in that way. I think the sci-fi was the main plan, but hey, I’m all for wandering if it leads somewhere interesting. Thanks so much, Kim.

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      1. You’re welcome!

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    Gillena Cox

    Very clever with so much scope for more episodes. The tone of her narrative did make me smile😊
    Happy you dropped by my blog.

    Much💜love

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    1. Thank you, Gillena. I love how 144 words make you really weed your language. To me it makes for a poetic sort of prose. It was a pleasure to stop by, and I appreciate your comments, as well. 💜

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  11. Very creative. Wow! Sci-fi dystopian sex drama. A bit of David Lynch maybe. 🙂

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    1. What a lovely compliment. I think I knew it was going to be steamy, but I wasn’t sure how to get it there in 144 words. I glad you enjoyed it, Merril. Means a lot.

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      1. You’re very welcome, K!

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  12. You amaze me with every word, well done, K! And I love that video!

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  13. Fascinating from top to bottom … just once in my life I would love to have LONG legs and walk on tin cans!!

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    kaykuala

    Lovely twist to the whole episode K! It sure is fun when young. Your brothers were there to make it safe!

    Hank

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  15. Really love this!

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    1. Thank you, Bridgette.😁

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  16. Somehow your “Love Criminal” brings to my mind Christina Rosetti’s “Goblin Market”!

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