The pool shivers before we begin.

Is the god above so jealous

we must cover our heads

when we swim?

Light blue churn

as women take turns diving in,

only within the sanctioned-off section.

Hours of submersion

to be strictly observed.

The pool cleared of men for this purpose.

We jump without form or direction,

nor knowledge of what lies hidden

below our uv protection.

To speak of the body,

strictly forbidden.

The lifeguards will whistle

at any whisper or giggle.

We live behind the spandex curtain.

Modesty and subservience required

as Totalitarians Suburban.

©2023 | K.F. Hartless


Artwork: Ian Davis

The Clientele “Lady Grey”

10 responses to “Totalitarians Suburban”

  1. Is this organised chaos? 🙂

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    1. A microcosm of totalitarianism in the neighborhood pool? I’m not quite sure, except to say, I don’t want to wade anywhere near it.

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      1. I have to agree there it didn’t sound like the nicest place to be.

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  2. You date blaspheme our dark overlords? Gary and Karen?!

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      1. Damn, I didn’t see the typo. It was supposed to be “dare” not “date”. I hope you’re not dating Gary or Karen. They’re both douche bags.

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      2. Oh man. I don’t get with down with the namism (aka name racism). 🤣

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      3. Lol

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  3. I will keep driving. You can find me at the nude beach. 😂

    Brilliant poem that masterfully weaves together a few genres.

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  4. Thank you kindly, Michele. I think I’ll hitch a ride with you. 🙂 👍🏼

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