~After Haley Blais “The Cabin”

The odor in the carpet

no one’s noticed before.

The ache in my left side

when I triple-lock the cabin door.

What happens when I fall asleep?

Sickness has a snore.

What happens when my insides

spill like Médoc on the floor?

The smoke inside

exhumed forevermore;

my lies a rancid tar pit.

©2023 | K.F. Hartless


Cover Art: Kamal Gurung

10 responses to “Warning Signs”

  1. Brilliant.

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    1. Thank you, Misky. 💜

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  2. This is powerful!

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    1. Thank you, worms. The overloaded brain at work. 😉

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  3. Unsettling. Love it of course.

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    1. 🙂 I’m so glad this week is in the rearview. Here’s to some sort of a weekend and the time to unwind.

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  4. So beautiful. Anita

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    Anonymous

    A unique and very interesting response! I love it…especially the incorporation of the line.

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    1. ~Mish

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    2. Many thanks.

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