Back curved by rheumatoid arthritis, morning to night, I watched my old man pick. His branch-like hands worked over the dwarf plants until the daylight hours were all spent.

“The trick is to pull the white stuff from the boll without getting a nasty nick. And remember,” he pointed at me for emphasis, “do not put two hands on the same boil.”

In one magic motion, he removed the fluff without the backlash of the bur. “Never reach for the same boil twice, and be sure to alternate left and right.”

I copied his motions and took in my first harvest.

Wiping his brow with a white t-shirt, my old man paused, lifted my cotton skyward where it took the place of an absent moon.

“You cannot pluck moonlight to bring in your pocket, child, but it’s cotton, not moonlight, keeps the lanterns lit.”


dVerse Poet’s Pub | 144 words prosery to include the line “You cannot pluc moonlight to bring your pocket.” Helen Hoyt “October Letter”

Cover Artwork: My Cotton Picking Story

30 responses to “What Keeps the Lanterns Lit”

  1. A wonderful response to the prompt. I love your piece!!!!

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    1. Thank you, Judy. I heard the quote and thought immediately of plucking cotton.

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      1. Did you ever pick cotton? It sounds as though you definitely know the techniques and dangers.

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    2. I don’t remember every picking it. Maybe in a past life, though? I’ve mostly read about it from my studies.

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  2. Really impressive, K; I’ve not seen you write anything like this before; restrained and powerful —

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    1. Thank you kindly, John. I really appreciate your kind comments. 🙂Cotton picking is a theme I’ve explored before, but it seems to resurface.

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    Gillena Cox

    Bravo nice use of the prompt line. Happy Monday

    Much💛love

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    1. Thank you, Gillena. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my prosery.
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  4. Wonderful!! Just beautiful!

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    1. Thank you, worms. 💜

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  5. I love this one, K. A great story. You must have grown up in Cotton Country!

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    1. Thanks, Dwight. Well, it’s something I’ve thought about a lot, and I’ve definitely seen cotton fields.

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    ren

    so good! the photo is perfect as well.

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    1. Thank you, ren. I stumbled on the photo searching for a specific fact about picking cotton. But the prompt made me immediately think of this moment.

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  7. love this K 💓

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    1. Thank you, Cindy. I appreciate you reading this piece. 💜

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      1. You’re always welcome K💞

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  8. So original… I can really live this story including the skill required for such work.

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    1. Thank you so much, Björn. The more I’m around plants here in Virginia I grow to appreciate the care that goes in to making things grow and harvesting the crop.

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  9. What a wonderfully unique piece! I love the descriptions, such as ‘branch-like hands’ and ‘in one magic motion, he removed the fluff without the backlash of the bur’, and the wisdom in the final sentence.

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    1. Thank you, Kim. The way the boll is picked is almost like a sleight-of-hand trick. I appreciate your kind feedback.

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  10. Very inventive and imaginative!

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    1. Thank you, Jane. The moon failed to make an appearance last night, and when I read this line it made me think of what it must have been like to pick on a cloudy evening.

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  11. The photo is very sad, K, your words are perfect.

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    1. Thank you, John. 💜 And, I agree. These are the photos that need to be shared, though, as we remember our past and strive to prevent such things from happening in the future.

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  12. K, the image was a shock to my system. Oh shame on anyone responsible, past, present, and future, for effecting such atrocity. The gentleness of the child’s father in teaching how to get through with as little damage as possible gives me a lump in my throat. First class writing.

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    1. Thank you, Lisa. I try to write about the hard things (about myself and about the past). I think we have to do just that, if we want to continue to change for the better.

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      1. You’re welcome and I agree.

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  13. really loved your story, it felt very real ….

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