I met Lisette
at the local laundromat
shoveling mountains
into a steel drum.
Her jeans so tight,
she struggled
to get a quarter
from the front pocket.
“Short changed?” I said.
She chuckled,
and after a stack
we were washing,
drying and folding friends.

©2023 | K.F. Hartless


d’Verse Poet’s Pub | Quadrille #186 – Fold 

Cover Artwork: “Friday Night at the Laundromat” Randy Weisbin

Maple Glider “Friend”

35 responses to “Folding Friends”

  1. Carol C Avatar
    Carol C

    Believable and quite relatable. Enjoyed your quadrille very much!

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    1. Thank you kindly, Carol. It’s actually inspired by a scene in a short story of mine. It came to mind as soon as read the prompt.

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  2. I love the way these women met, became friends. The laundromat is indeed a place where all sorts of interesting folks gather. A delightful quadrille, Carol.

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    1. Apologies … I do know you are not Carol.

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      1. Maybe its the white noise of the place, but it always invited a sense of secrets and intimacy, at least when I used it.

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  3. I love this.

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    1. Thank you, Nicole. 💜

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  4. A delightful gem!

    “shoveling mountains
    into a steel drum” 👏🏻

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    1. Oh, I do miss the massive drum of the laundromat. It could conquer any load, I swear. Thanks, Michele. 💜

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      1. No doubt! Including large blankets. 😁 Welcome, K.

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  5. This sounds like a perfect place to meet. I have never really experiences laundromats as they are non-existent in Sweden.

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    1. Oh, that’s so interesting. I didn’t realize that. I really went in my 20’s when the washer and dryer weren’t part of the budget for my apartment. But, I think there’s something to be said for airing your laundry in public. 🙂

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  6. I haven’t been to a launderette for year, but your quadrille reminded me of a time when it was the place to meet up. Thanks for evoking that memory!

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    1. You’re very welcome, Kim. It’s been a long time for me as well, but whenever I pas one of them, I do think about that special sort of “down time” and the conversations.

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  7. love this poem , friends are made on common ground

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    1. So true. I have been lucky to find those kindred souls at different points in my life. Here’s to more washing, drying and folding friends.

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  8. Jim Avatar
    Jim

    I knew you guys woulld make friends. My hunch came true, beautifully written.
    ..

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    1. Good instincts, Jim. The laundromat had that lull to it. I think it made it easier to talk and share about our lives.

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  9. I love this little story of folding friends. I can see how it could happen.

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    1. Thank you, Merril. It wasn’t a magical place for most, I suppose, but there was a sense of belonging there, and in a way, I miss that.

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      1. You’re welcome. I can understand that.

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  10. 🥰❤️😊

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    1. Thanks, John. 💜

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  11. Easy to make relatable connection to this , and the way the friendship unfolds

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    1. Yes, well, we didn’t have to iron out any details. It was a perfect fit from the start. Thanks so much.

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  12. The laundromat is a good way to connect…also (in my case) the laundry room in my building. Almost as good as the elevator! (K)

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    1. Indeed. I miss that social engagement, and the fun of friendship making a heavy chore feel like. Thanks, K. 🙂

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  13. I love these lines:
    “shoveling mountains
    into a steel drum”

    I can see this!

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    1. Thank you. Those commercial drums were the best. It’s a sense of wait time (before there were cell phones to make us all isolate) that makes me smile.

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  14. Such a good story !

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    1. Thank you. It is actually inspired by a snippet of a story of mine (with a little real-life sprinkled in). The Laundromat is a forgotten magical place.

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      1. We used to live above one in London. The only place I’ve everything seen Londoners interact on a friendly basis with strangers. Anywhere else – nothing not even eye contact.

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  15. A lovely anecdote / snippet of life, KK! ❤

    Much love,
    David

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  16. I love the way there women became friends.

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  17. Great post very relatable

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