One million microbes had been injected, but in the morning, Faria’s face sagged, and she knew it was time for another visit. Sure, she could no longer raise her eyebrows, and at night, the microbes crawled across her chin and forehead, restless from their day as sentinels beneath her skin.

When she phoned the doctor, he told Faria she was reaching a limit.

“If you continue to inject at this rate, you could experience paralysis. In other words, the microbes could take over.”

Nevertheless, she waited for the doctor to prepare a fresh syringe.

“I have to tell you, I’ve never put these many microbes into anybody’s facial cavity before.”

Fiara needed this. Hungry for the silver needle, she gave the doctor her best grin.

“It’s a risk I’m willing to take.”

But that smile was the last smile to come upon her face.


d’Verse Poet’s Pub | Prosery 144 words to include the line:

“But that smile was the last smile
To come upon her face.”

“Ballad of Birmingham,” by Dudley Randal

Cover Art: Botox Auf Malle Holger Brandt, Germany, 2020

“Los Ageless” St. Vincent

20 responses to “Facial Dysmorphia”

  1. “Hungry for the silver needle ….” Now there’s a famine of another kind.

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    1. Indeed. A common in the urban jungle. Thanks for stopping by, Dora.

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  2. K, that is a harrowing allegory and you told it just right. That video is perfect for it, and tells me I need to listen to some more St. Vincent. She was a guest musician on Colbert a few months back and liked her then. A true female empowerment warrior!

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    1. Thank you, Lisa. I read the prompt and had to make dinner, but the idea was right there waiting for me. I enjoy St. Vincent, but also haven’t explored all of her music. Thanks so much for your comments. Glad to reconnect. 💜

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      1. You’re welcome, K. Yes on the reconnect ❤

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  3. K, your story adeptly weaves desire and peril, creating a suspenseful narrative around Faria’s risky pursuit. The vivid imagery and incorporation of the quoted line enhance the impact, making it a captivating and thought-provoking read.

    ~David

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    1. Many thanks, David. I think I just had this vision of a face that no longer moved and a future where microbes could make us all appear younger, if we are willing to assume the risks. I’m so glad you found this one captivating Kind regards, my friend.

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  4. I cannot really understand that hunger for a needle… I felt she did it for beauty, and there are a lot of dangerous treatments out there.

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    1. Oh, I suppose the needle is addictive to many and definitely to those obsessed with youth. I can’t say I’ve ever injected anything not prescribed, but I see faces (and tattooed limbs) here in the urban jungle. Pin cushions all.

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  5. Yikes! Why are so many people ‘hungry for the silver needle’? How can they do that to themselves? And it’s not just women. I recently saw a photograph of Mickey Rourke that gave me nightmares, as I am sure this sentence will: ’the microbes crawled across her chin and forehead, restless from their day as sentinels beneath her skin.’

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    1. Yes, the stuff or real-life horror stories. Thanks for connecting with my prosery, Kim. I will have to take a peak at Mickey Rourke. Sounds terrifying.

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  6. How many stars have we seen who have ruined their looks by trying to stop the aging process. Well written. Paints a vivid image.

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    1. Thanks, Ginny. I agree. It seems like a slippery slope, too. One that I have no intention of starting down. Thanks for connecting to my piece.

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  7. Prose that speaks the truth .. all one has to do is watch the recent award shows on television. Sorry reminder of all those needing to recapture their youth. Men and women alike. Great prose.

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  8. Thank you so much, Helen. I fear it only gets worse if we don’t start embracing our aging and all it’s beauty.

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    Very powerful story, with a biting commentary on the need for superficial beauty by those anxious of their ageing looks. Beautifully penned, K! 🙂

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  10. Wow ! pretty horrifying; well told, K; reminds me of an episode of ‘American Horror Stories’ from 2022 called ‘Facelift’; ugh

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  11. Takes the expression, more money than sense, to a whole new level!

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  13. It’s said that some people become addicted to plastic surgery and other treatments in their search to stay young-looking, but more often than not, they end up looking even worse. Though now very wrinkled, Judi Dench is far more beautiful than many younger women who’ve had too many procedures. And I love that St. Vincent song.

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