The window offers

constant comment–

strip mall tease,

power-line peak-a-boo bra

on booby trees,

noise walls on all fours

below the lash of Friday traffic.

Urban sprawl–

kissing silver doors,

the train floor giggling

at a pervert naked on his porch.

Just a few sights

on our way to the city

to score.

6 responses to “Metro Window”

  1. Love this K! So full of action and interesting language and great use of alliteration etc. Just really vibrant!

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    1. Thank you. I like how life provides. It always has for me. How blessed am I?

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  2. You currently have 888 followers. BooBy Trees!😁

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    1. Right. Booby trees, that’s a thousand right there. I’m honored by each and every one of them. 💜

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    2. Oh, yes. I get this now. Calculator fun. Middle school is back in session.

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      1. 👏🏼🤣😁

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