Her bristles could be coarse–– 
animal hair,
wild boar or horse.

Rigid enough for divorce.

Porcupine quills,
shards of sea shells,
stone and thigh bone,

whatever he's got
to untangle a snarl,
untie a hard knot.

A paint brush––
she's ego-stroking.
tug and toking,

with intuition,
full-on knowing.

Drill holes in her handle,
sew in bristles,
but they won't stay.

There's no need for rushing
the fantasy of a
deep, delicious brushing.

©2024 | K.F. Hartless


“Either Way” Odie Leigh

Prompt: Write a poem based on one of the curious headlines, cartoons, and other journalistic tidbits featured at Yesterday’s Print, where old new stays amusing, curious, and sometimes downright confusing. What a fun place to visit.

15 responses to “A Deep, Delicious Brushing”

  1. She’s an amazing woman. 🤭 The pencil sketch is amazing!

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    1. Yes, I agree. You’d like that website, John. It’s an attic of forgotten news.

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      1. Thanks. ☺️

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  2. If or when any of them are coming, they could also say they’re combing.

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    1. Yes indeed. Very astute observation. All grins.

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  3. Rigid enough for divorce! LOL. Very witty. I’m glad you picked this picture to work with. I was thinking it was very… evocative.

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    1. Thank you, Alana. It grabbed me instantly, although there was so much to enjoy on the site. I think I’ll go back there again soon to dig around for more treasure.

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  4. DDB now trending🚨🔥

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    1. 😆 I’m not exactly sure what that means, but I’m guessing it’s hilarious.

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  5. This is delicious, yes! Love the song, too. Thanks, K.

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    1. Thank you, Michele. I’m so glad you liked it. ~Katie

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      1. Oh yes, wonderful and highly imaginative, as you do. I added your song share to one of my playlists. Thank you, Katie.

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  6. I like especially the images in the third stanza–“shards of sea shells”–I bet there’s a brisk sea wind blowing too. (K)

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    1. Thank you, K. I think I would like a seashell brush.

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