The sky is festooned with twinkling 
to welcome the loon.

In a black and white tuxedo,
she lands on night's great tarmac,
as if it were dark waters,
and is forever marooned.

With clumsy gait,
she must defend a strange territory,
no longer a torpedo shot from submarine.

Unable to dive,
to stab at stars with her bill,
to swallow the unlucky constellations
that chance to swim by.

With a burgeoning belly of white,
the loon will flap her wings uselessly
late into the chilly night.

She has no choice
but to lay her precious clutch in plain sight.
The sky is no island;
its mud flats dried.

Her voice like native flute,
hollow as a runway,
calls back her mate,
but their is no echo to her mournful tune.

The isolation maddening,
her wistful voice finds no reply.

©2024 | K.F. Hartless


Cover Art: “Nouveau Loon Moon” Kari Vick Ink

Prompt: Write a poem about, or involving, a superhero. While I realize it’s not a traditional sort of hero, I personally think all mothers are superheroes, including the brave mother loon nesting above me this evening.

Yeah Yeah Yeahs “Wolf”

10 responses to “The Loon Moon”

  1. ❤ ❤ ❤ Enchanting and sorrowful. I pray for protection for mother loon and her eggs. May her mate call his return with the dawn.

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    1. Yes, a sorrowful cry for protection for all mothers near and far. Thanks, Lisa.

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      1. Amen.

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  2. p.s. I love this song and the video! Saw it quite awhile ago. Once seen never forgotten.

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    1. I just saw it for the first time today, in an unlikely search for video’s featuring a loon. 😂 I also thought to feature a native flute, but couldn’t seem to find the right song. This video was a stunner. I, too, won’t easily forget it.

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  3. beautiful imagery throughout!

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    1. Thank you, Katrina.💜

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  4. Tom Avatar

    This was wonderful, Katie! Powerful descriptions of the struggles of motherhood in nature. ❤

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    1. Thank you kindly, Tom. I have felt those struggles, but I also love being a mother. I never thought that would be true, but I genuinely enjoy it. 💜

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