The moon has left the sky, love.
Her aria has ended.
The courts of sparkling fans
from concert hall descended.

The sun is on the rise, love.
His temper spiking swiftly.
As anger peaks, analemma;
the sun and moon aren't speaking.

The moon is in her change-room, love.
Her cheeks powdered white,
In sequin suit, she waits nervously
to climb the stage of night.

Somewhere below horizon, love,
the sun begins to nudge.
When his radiant and splendid bride appears,
he quickly drops his grudge

in hopes that that he might catch a wink,
before the curtains budge.

©2024 | K.F. Hartless


Cover Art: Analemma Painting by Eva Helyes

Prompt: Write a poem that begins with a line from another poem (not necessarily the first one), but then goes elsewhere with it. My poem’s first line is taken from the poem, “Night of Love” by Paul Laurence Dunbar.

“Blinding Lights” Abigail Lapell (The Weend Cover)

13 responses to “True Love Turned”

  1. So fun, as though I as on a different level of living. The image is so amazing!

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    1. Thank you, John. I like to decorate this space, and this poem came up in one of my classes today. I am glad I’ve been able to hang in there this year with NaPoWriMo.

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      1. ❤️😊

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  2. Enchanting, K!

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    1. Thanks, Lisa. I enjoyed crafting it. NaPoWriMo is always a great adventure!

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      1. YW

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  3. this flight of fancy is magical; extremely well crafted but done with a light touch — and it never falters; I love the metaphors: change rooms, concert halls ….

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    1. Many thanks, John. I wanted more time to massage this one a bit more, but I really enjoyed taking that one line and really blasting off with it.

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      1. I think you did the right thing; I massaged my ‘The Lighter’ poem for a year and I’m glad I did: there was so much to include and honor; but sometimes a poem is best written off the cuff; if it has wings, it can fly —

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      2. Yes, well, wing span not in account, I am often content with a gentle glide. But, I agree that there is magic in the moment. Cheers.

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      3. ‘ a gentle glide’ : I .love that 🙂

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  4. What a delightful verse.

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  5. Thanks, DD. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your comment very much.

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