When night cracks the whip,
Peter the Pumpkin Eater
is back,
and no one minds
what happens behind the rind,
the loud smacks,
the busted lip.

Walls thick enough to forget,
melon-blind to prying eyes,
unwanted guests;
the rumors dismissed.

They say his wife's a cheater.
The say he doesn't beat her,
just leaves her in a hollow cell
with a pepita for a pillow,
and that rotting smell,
but no one ever sees her.

A guarded gourd
that Peter,
and the endless cycle
of seed to seed,
pulpy flesh,
jealousy and need
remain the fruits
of the garden marriage bed.

©2023 | K.F. Hartless


13 responses to “Peter, Peter”

  1. Tom Avatar

    Very spooky for the season, K! 🙂 Powerful haunting verses.

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    1. Thank you, Tom. Cheers to a magical fall weekend filled with compostable story ideas.

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  2. Thanks for sharing idea.Anita

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    1. 😀 Thank you.

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  3. love the spooky imagery, the nasty narrative behind our jocularly named Peter the Pumpkin Eater and the nod to Halloween —

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    1. Thank you, John. It came down to the little nursery rhyme sponge in my life, my son. He was seriously concerned about Peter’s wide, which made me reconsider his actions.

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  4. Wow. Astonishing. I want to read it over and over. Loved the first read but feel i missed a lot. Going back for more.

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  5. Thank you, worms. I must say my son brought this odd behavior to my attention. I’m glad I was listening. Cheers to a great weekend!

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  6. Yes, this took me on a journey, love or lust does grow in mysterious directions and places. ✨🎃❣️

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    1. Thank you. I found this nursery rhyme always had a mystery waiting to be told. 🎃💜

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  7. Wow. Very thought provoking when paired with the video

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    1. Thank you so much, VJ. I think the pumpkin eater always gave me the shivers as a child. I just couldn’t fathom being happy to be locked away in a gourd. So, I’m glad I finally decided to write about it. Happy Halloween, friend. 🎃🎃

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      1. Welcome

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