Below the green gazebo,

a gingham tablecloth held down

by fresh-cut watermelon slices

the color of my sister’s lip gloss.

Sticky fingers slide steel strings;

picking was a family thing

and what couldn’t be harvested,

was left to rot,

next year’s early gardening.

When things go to pot,

I bury my soul in a scrapbook

with the photographs

and the moss,

and I smell the edges

for a whiff of Estée Lauder,

a puff of chimney smoke,

or a glimpse of the old Ford pickup

sliding on driveway rocks

in the rearview of my memory.

12 responses to “Rearview Memory”

  1. Great poem, Katie. Feeling the seasons and vibe of this great song.💕

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    1. Thank you, Cindy. I feel lucky to have these memories. A sort of security blanket during tough times. 💜 I truly appreciate you reading and commenting on my poems. 🙏

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      1. It’s a pleasure always, Katie. and yes we all need that blanket🤗

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  2. wonderful, wonderful, wonderful: the rhythm, the happy rhymes and the delectable images; a great start to the morning at Queenstown 🙂

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    1. Thank you, John. 💜🙏 Your comments always gust my writing sails open. I hope your day continued on joyfully. It was hot and hectic here in Bangkok. My students are taking their final exams of this semester so there’s all sorts of sweat happening. 🤣🤣

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      1. I love that exuberant comment; thanks Katie, hope your students do well 🙂

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  3. Rhythmic and evocative. I relish the color contrast between green gazebo and red watermelon in the beginning. Well done🧺🍉🛻

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    1. Thank you so much, EP. 💚🍉 I think the past is super vivid for me, probably more so than it really was. What will I make of these Bangkok memories I wonder?

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  4. killing it, so nostalgic. I love your writing style.

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  5. Definitely nostalgic, moves you to recall all the best memories. Lovely write, Katie!

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