I'm full of surprises,
like tom yum soup—
wonton, soft-boiled, anything goes.
But, I lack composition, clear subject;
I'm out of focus.
The flickering lighting, the leading
lines that don't come together in ribbons and bows,
burst forth with the worst of timing;
my intuition is an albatross of yeses and nos.
With one foot slightly wider,
one ear slightly higher, and
teeth that don't sit quite straight in their rows,
I lack the symmetry of a rose.
I'm underexposed.
While we both capture a moment
that can not be cloned,
I'm blurry; I exert no self-control.
Shutter speed a flurry,
aperture often closed,
the ups and downs of my ISO.
No, I'm no photograph.
I've developed much too slow.
©2025|K.F.Hartless
Cover Art: Still Life Blue Guitar (1982) Composite Photo David Hockney

GloPoWriMo #7: Today, we challenge you to write a similar kind of self-portrait poem, in which you explain why you are not a particular piece of art (a symphony, a figurine, a ballet, a sonnet), use at least one outlandish comparison, and a strange (and maybe not actually real) fact.





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